wow! really realistic take on the adult Link first moments! I love how he fears he now has to do "man" things like getting a wife!
Also, I didnt' think about Link having a beard, but it does make sense!

I think this is one of the better fan fictions, as far as giving Link a voice/opinions. I felt the pain.

I really like this, I hope that maybe you write more in the future _

Sincerely,

The Fullmetal Chibi

Very interesting. First time I've seen something like this. The game, of course, never gave much on Link's reaction to his sudden growth, but I like how you expanded on it in a way I haven't seen before. Having him still in his child outfit, as well as long hair/beard, was a nice choice.

Personally, it's up to you whether you continue this or not, since it works just as well as a oneshot as it would a full story, but it'd be nice to see it continued. I like your style of writing here.

~Lupanari~

The opening was a little jarring - the constant "he's just a kid" in a story mainly written in past tense kept making me stop and look back, which isn't what you want your readers to be doing.

Aside from that, I can't find a thing to complain about. The story flows nicely, with just enough emphasis on the little details to make for some really vivid imagery. The long flowing introspective paragraphs could have been annoying in the wrong hands, but you work them beautifully. Great job, and keep up the writing.

Personally I think the impact is best as a oneshot.