Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Has so much potential sadly have had to stop reading after 11 chapters as it’s just a bit to clumsily written. Good concept tho. Keep going... get someone to check your spelling x

The idea is a good one but the writing needs some minor improvement.

what the hell even is this. nope, if i could dislike it, i would.

what is with the stupid bold text stuff at the end?

Good story.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

So far, so good.

I think Vader should have Force-choked Fury! (Btw, I know this is an AU story, but if Vader didn't kill the younglings, who did? Did I miss something earlier in the story - and how did Nate hear about the younglings' murder?)

There was no reason, no reason at all for Ahsoka to confide in anyone. And Leia telling the council ? Really ? Nice enough story, but the character actions you describe here are more than aggravating, it's simply weak writing. Drama for the sake of drama is always the worst kind.
Sorry, couldn't be more positive, but this chapter annoyed me.

Wait. What?

Hi i really like your story but ummm... vader doesn't wear a hood- it's a mask. unless you were doing this fanfic so he doesn't get burnt up on mustafar? sorry if i sounded rude but yeah vader wears a mask not a hood. it helps with his respirator and all that cuz he would look less intimidating with tubes goin out of his nose and all that. ya know cuz he's a sith and all. no offense. Um sorry i'm pretty sure you were just doing an AU where he doesn't need the mask and still looks sort of like anakin. again, real sorry.

Goddamnit Leia.

Wait, hood? Where is Vader's super-awesome, ultra-kickass suit!? HERESY! *BLAM!*

That's okay, Vader. From the Old Republic MMORPG, we know that even Sith care about their families. Albeit, also willing to murder said families but at least they're greatly pained by it.