i love it! i love genma and raidou. 3 great!
but, i wish there was more romantic in it. it's so fast loss fuck.
and you need flush! flush! flush! flush! ! ... gome.
but it is so fantastic! i LOVE It,
please wirte more. i don't know, when do you puplic this, but... yeah i am to late. please read my reviwe! :)

love,
Naoko

Please do th hayate x genma lemon please I wold love to read it

Genma X Hayate Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes

wow that was so smexy loved it (blushes)

OMG OMG loved it(kinda weird hearing that from me because i dont really like guy on guy action) but it was AWESOME! keep going Cheyenna xD

Good that was hot

Don't go down on yourself, I enjoyed reading your story! You have a unique writing style, something you don't see here often. I'm sure you could be a great writer, it all comes with practice.

Job well done!

it WAS a little fast, but I still liked it D In fact, I'm going to favourite it!