Add more or I kill u

A fantastic story please keep on with it :D

Hi a very good fic but just a few things i don't think you quite got across. the elves are not just stronger than most but are quicker more ajile. Also you had eragon ask why did all the elves leave for the war. well all the humans in serda did not leave and not all the dwarphs leave. They all leave a small force behind to protect there land and they only take fighters and some wimmen and children. so why should the elves be any different? also they are stronger and more able spell casters. so fighting with one of them would offer him more. apart from that this is a great fic and i like it.

Awesome! Potential new D Rider! It will be Arya, right?

awesome sutch a dramatic ending i cant wait for more

I know it has been over a year, but I hope that you won't give up on this story and update it.

Please continue this! I'm extremely intrigued! Your characterisations are spot on (particularly Saphira and Arya) and your plot seems coherent and well thought out.

You can't just leave it here, I'm dying to know how it all ends, do they get the egg? does Murtagh stay good? does Eragon defeat Gallbatorix? does Arya stop being the most mysterious main character ever? and does Angela finally flip and turn everyone into newts?

Gah!

I realise of course you probably won't be continuing, but I thought I'd let you know that I'd love it if you did.

Pen.

Hey this a pretty good story! I like the way you made everyone not too ooc, its kinda annoying when other fanfic authers make Arya too dramatic or too googley over Eragon.

Wonderboy

when r u going to update i like the story but update soon

Most book four stories start off with Eragon at Feinster, which I don't think it will, but this is good anyway. I'll keep reading!

This was really good. I love it! Most people have trouble getting the characters into character, but you had no problem with that, especially Arya! She is the hardest to get into character. Too bad you left the story hear.

Kudos to you.

Keep writing.

Varun

P.S. you're definitely in my list of favourites.

VERY good! PLease continue! I was very impressed with the premonition part. PLease update soon. I am adding this story to my favorites! ;D

UPDATE. YOU MUST. OR I WILL BE VERY SAD. kthanks :)

Please make an update mate because this is one of the best stories I've seen.

I'm so happy I decided to read this! I can't wait for the next update, and I loved how you resolved the Murtagh thing. The only constructive criticism I can offer is that there were a few random misspellings, but I wouldn't even mention those if you hadn't specifically asked for constructive criticism. Kudos, and keep typing!