Awsome,
for some reason I wanted to call you FairyLover101, probably because of the story.

This fanfic is so cure i loved

The story is great

Dang tht was freaky naraku bein nice to kagome whoa and then turnin her into a midnight fairy and sesshomaru bein in love with kagome and him sing tht really did surprised me it did. Sesshomaru asked inuyasha for help wow thts never happen before

I 3 this story

totally amazing,loved it.

good story

i really liked this story! ususally i dont like one-shots but i completely loved this one!

-Moon Demon.

love it

This was so entirely improbable. Sesshomaru was out of character the entire time (singing?) Rin speaks in third person. "Rin can fly!" and it was too condensed. If you are going to introduce something such as "fairies" into this world, you need to take more time to explain it. More on her discovery of them.

I'm glad you're writing to improve your skill. If there's one thing you need to work on, it's setting your scene, and not glossing over details. Events happen, and just saying they happen is not enough.

At the moment, you're just letting the reader see what happens, like a montage on tv. While it has its place, the written word has the ability to reach past and invite the reader INTO the world with the characters. That's something to work on at the moment. You need to establish your world better. At the moment, you give more space to the songs than to settings.

This is not a flame, this is meant as constructive criticism. You have talent, and I would hate to see that buried in flames, or unwarranted praise. I have some experience with Beta reading (editing) and would be willing to help you if you want it.

SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL! ... sorry ... tired... i love it!