| Reviews for Fake Out |
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   Pokemon67 chapter 8 . 5/2/2014 This is an AWESOME story! The writing style was so great and it kept my interest! The summary does NOT agree with this story, I love this story! As for Emily being a Mary-sue, apart from being a prodigy, I think she is a very well balanced charecter! And weren't McCoy and the other offiercs just a little bit hard on the 'chief petty nurse'? After all, he DID run the sickbay pretty well while McCoy was out. Again, AWESOME story! :) Happy Writing! |
| SIM99 chapter 3 . 5/27/2013 I'm not sure if you rewrote this and didn't change the description, but I thought this was pretty good, especially considering you wrote it in middle school. I'm going to read the rest tomorrow. |
| originalseriestrekkie chapter 8 . 5/27/2011 Nice. I enjoyed this fanfic! Keep up the good work! - originalseriestrekkie |
| Toadflame chapter 8 . 8/27/2009 Very good for a first Trek story. |
| Sonar chapter 7 . 7/24/2009 Leave it to Chekov to have accidents. I love this chapter. |
| bluedragon1836 chapter 6 . 7/12/2009 i'm hooked! What happens next? I want to know! |
| Sonar chapter 4 . 6/29/2009 Priceless. The old fashioned way works everytime. |
| SLWalker chapter 4 . 6/28/2009 Brief concrit: Aside once (where Doohan and everyone else thought it was out of character), Scotty never called Kirk 'Jim'. He's not on a first-name basis with any of the crew, not even McCoy. But especially in a critical situation, he would be formal - sir, Captain. Other'n that, though, good action and pacing. Not exactly sure why your OCs name has the italics going on in it, but I'm sure you have a reason. Welcome to the fandom! (And don't mind my nitpicking. ;-) ) |
| TheDreamerLady chapter 4 . 6/28/2009 I don't trust it, no I don't. Why Scotty smile sadly, huh? Because sad smiles and the content of the conversation makes me suspect... that all is not as it seems. Good job on the story, you are doing an excellent job. ~amanda |
| Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 3 . 6/25/2009 More? This is good. |
| shejams chapter 3 . 6/23/2009 Yay you've updated! This is really good. You got me on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what's happening. Keep up the good work and keep it coming! :-) |
| MiVarFan93 chapter 2 . 6/20/2009 ,please. |
| shejams chapter 1 . 6/19/2009 This is your first Star Trek story? Not bad, not bad at all. In fact this is very good and promising. It is well written and you seem to capture the characters very well. I can't wait to see what happens next. You certaintly got my attention. I look forward to more. Update soon! :-) |
