This was lovely! Thank you so much for writing and sharing! I especially loved the portion set on the beach; the book is from Marguerite’s point of view, so it was doubly fun to see the scene from his. You did an excellent job - thanks so much. I’m smiling.

Squee! I just had the pleasure of reading this book, and, I must say, you got Percy perfectly! I love it! :D I love the line near the end about the silly smile on his face and how proud he was of her!

Chauvelin, not Chevaulin.

Beautiful, thanks for writing it.

I like the theme of this fic, though if I might make the suggestion, it would be easier to read if the three parts were more visibly separated.

That was really cool!

So awesome! I really like the part about the suit; that is so Percy!

That was lovely!

Great job! I really the Scarlet Pimpernel and I think you captured Percy's emotions well.

OMGSH! This is extremely well-written! You managed to keep Percy completely in character, even though not that much of his character was shone in the book. You did a fantastic job! Please write more!

Oh, it's pretty. I loved the parallels between the three mini-stories. Percy's description of his outfit was hysterical.

:D PP

Love it :-D Absolutely spot on in every way :-D

Jess

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Very nicely written - good job!:) thanks for sharing1

Aww that was beautiful and I felt you kept Percy IC. Well written, I love it. Thanks

Fantasy

nothing to say but...wow!