| Reviews for The doll |
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Racgirl chapter 2 . 3/9/2015 Cliff Hanger! |
Racgirl chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 This is really good |
IcyAngels452 chapter 2 . 1/5/2014 This is awesome! Please continue! |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2012 Awwww, NO! Tails bro! :'( Awesome fanfic :) |
tails the cute fox chapter 2 . 10/29/2012 Woah plz finish it. Epic |
tails the cute fox chapter 1 . 10/29/2012 Epic epic epic! It's so good. U should be proud |
Sonic103 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012 whoa... i think you did a good job with your english. just a couple here and there. but don't we all make a few mistakes? also, i'd suggest when you're writing a story, you should mention a change in the point of view. it would make it a lot easier to understand what's going on... |
Incinirmatt chapter 2 . 1/8/2011 This is a good story, a few errors but good. I recommend having Tails resist a little more like when TD is trying to talk him into killing Cream make the conversation last longer |
Handepsilon chapter 2 . 10/1/2010 Okay, scary story it is... |
animal freak17 chapter 2 . 9/26/2009 man that wass just like the esploug story (Not sure if its spelled right) it was made by mari the hedgcat. But dude this was possibly as good as that il have to read more but this is turnning out to be awsom! Keep up the awsom work - |
Moka Raiden chapter 2 . 8/15/2009 oh no! poor Tails! please contiue |
Puzan chapter 2 . 8/1/2009 wow this is a really good story! very creepy, i hope Sonic will beable to save Tails, can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work! |
Dreamer of a Card Game chapter 2 . 7/18/2009 Dude... This is awesome! It's awesome, how you created this story, and the way you set up the dialogue was good too. Now I won't get confused about who is talking. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
deidara-kupkake chapter 2 . 7/3/2009 AMAZING! You gotta finish the story! |
SkyeGavin chapter 2 . 6/26/2009 This is a warning. Entries Not allowed: 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries. |