Reviews for The doll
Racgirl chapter 2 . 3/9/2015
Cliff Hanger!
Racgirl chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
This is really good
IcyAngels452 chapter 2 . 1/5/2014
This is awesome! Please continue!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Awwww, NO! Tails bro! :'( Awesome fanfic :)
tails the cute fox chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
Woah plz finish it. Epic
tails the cute fox chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Epic epic epic! It's so good. U should be proud
Sonic103 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
whoa...

i think you did a good job with your english. just a couple here and there. but don't we all make a few mistakes?

also, i'd suggest when you're writing a story, you should mention a change in the point of view. it would make it a lot easier to understand what's going on...
Incinirmatt chapter 2 . 1/8/2011
This is a good story, a few errors but good. I recommend having Tails resist a little more like when TD is trying to talk him into killing Cream make the conversation last longer
Handepsilon chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
Okay, scary story it is...
animal freak17 chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
man that wass just like the esploug story (Not sure if its spelled right) it was made by mari the hedgcat. But dude this was possibly as good as that il have to read more but this is turnning out to be awsom! Keep up the awsom work -
Moka Raiden chapter 2 . 8/15/2009
oh no! poor Tails! please contiue
Puzan chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
wow this is a really good story! very creepy, i hope Sonic will beable to save Tails, can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work!
Dreamer of a Card Game chapter 2 . 7/18/2009
Dude... This is awesome! It's awesome, how you created this story, and the way you set up the dialogue was good too. Now I won't get confused about who is talking. I can't wait for the next chapter.
deidara-kupkake chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
AMAZING! You gotta finish the story!
SkyeGavin chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
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