Please update?

I love how Edward get himself into type of problem like this

Is this story complete?

On thing that I dis-like in fanfiction is when people "overwrite" characters with a different personality, to the point where it might as well be an OC.

I love how you didn't do that.

You could have included the swimming scene to add some intimacy (?) and suspense, but other than that, I was utterly satisfied with the story. I just hope that it's incomplete and waiting an amazing ending.

Awww, please continue! Soo, cute and sweet :D

u should make a continueation of this, its good

Are you going to continue this? Because you should! :D

I am very happy now. ;/;

Lazward needs more love, MAOR. D8

AWESOME! UPDATE!

This is good-a few mistakes-but good! I cannot wait to read more!