MOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooorrrrrr re! \/w yea Craig style peace!

:D that's so awesome! :D

D'aw!

The ending's sweet!

I remeber when I tried my first cigarette, I was with a friend of mine and I was all afraid I'd get addicted like everyone always said.

But I didn't! And all I could remeber was thinking that the smoke I exhaled was really sexy looking o-o

Im not addicted to the tobacco, but to the pure sexiness of cigarettes!

...

But yeah, love this story! o3o

Just reading this made me open up my window and grab my almost-empty pack. Thanks for reminding me -takes a puff- Not being sarcastic, by the way.

Anyways, this was pretty good. Entertained me.

"He ran his tongue across his teeth, wondering if they were yellow yet."

bahaha so cute3~ lmfao he's been smoking for like, a week. XD i love how you described stan describing kyle. "It was beautiful."

As soon as I finished reading this, I had to go light a cigarette. That's how good it was.

OMG, this is fantastic! Your qriting is exquisite and your characterization - OH MY GOD it's just so perfect, and the plot and Kyle being all cute and overprotective and ah, I love it. And I cannot wait for an update!

Haha, I remember in season three they said Stan had asthma. Doesn't that mean smoking would kill him?

I now have an urge to take up smoking, thanks to this little gem.

That aside, I thought the story itself was beautifully written. I hope to read more from you in the near future.

That was... Awesome!

XD

I love how you could turn smoking into a sense of trust and the base of which a relationship *could* have been built on. I like how you involved Kenny, i thought that was funny . Well, i have to say i really love this story, it was written so well.

~MK