| Reviews for All in the Kiss |
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bB chapter 1 . 4/30 Super cute and sweet! Ha the loopholes on kissing hehe I need my own Luke, lucky lorelai! Fabulous story! Loved it so much |
rachel625 chapter 1 . 11/24/2017 Haha! Oh my gosh that was so good! Of course Lorelai would find the loophole! |
junienmomo chapter 1 . 12/25/2015 What you've captured so magically here are the moments that happen between our pair in the middle of their banter. It's these real flashes of truth that keep us hoping for their eventual success, even as they both acknowledge that they have tacitly agreed to not take action on them. A flash of the eyes, a half-smile, cdeliberately not looking up, knowing that the challenge would be too raw. So many awesome moments, including the heartbreaking ones when the othe sees the wanting or the hurt in the first person's eyes. Lovely. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2015 an oldie but a goodie. I wish you still wrote. You are/were very talented! Thanks for sharing your stories with us :) |
StandInTheRain42 chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 Great, great story... |
bob chapter 1 . 11/21/2013 why no rory |
Liz86000 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 I just love this story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 loved it! just like a love so many of your stories. thanks for writing |
Freakytiky chapter 1 . 11/3/2010 I know you're probably three times as busy as any of us, but can you please write more pre-hookup GG stories? I feel like GG interest is dying! |
amyylasee chapter 1 . 11/18/2009 wow. just wow. loved it! |
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 11/4/2009 Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Very cute! I'm glad that everything worked out the way it did! I loved the reference to having a chick loose! I saw that episode last weekend and that's part of what got me on my sudden "Gilmore Girls" fan fiction kick! Wonderful story! |
Kate chapter 1 . 11/1/2009 OMG I absolutely loved this story! It was the perfect combination of sweet and funny ). You have a real gift your writing is excellent keep up the good work! |
suusje32 chapter 1 . 7/12/2009 thank you, really enjoyed reading you story :) |
cywen69 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009 As always, I loved it! But as with all your stories, this isn't new. My favorite part was her asking him to help her find a chick. I cracked up. Totally didn't see it coming, but it fit so perfectly. I also loved her loophole. Now you have me wondering what Rory will say about the whole thing. Wendy |
Dudly chapter 1 . 6/19/2009 I love that you're still posting LL oneshots every so often. :) And I also love the author note at the beginning of the story. I always find it interesting to know where the story came from, that way I can actually formulate my own idea on a given situation, think up a bit and enjoy the developing plot that much more. n_n So. I say, this is a great one. Like most of your other stuff, really. Just wondering a little something- āIām good for up to seventy.ā Lorelai dropped her face in her palm. I'm slow. What did that mean? *feels quite stupid* dudly xx |