Hi, rereading the first chapter I feel like SM should have taken more of the route that you did with this story. Maybe she did not because its what was expected but I find this storyline much more fitting.

I just found this story. I really have enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. You left it in a tuff spot, do hope you are planning to continue. Thank you for your work.

This is great but I especially loved chap 8. the interactions with everyone at school. Angela Edward time was nice wish there was more... liked it alot.

"...Suddenly my cell phone rang..." lol lol Poor Edward having to deal with Emmett::))

Great chapter!

Awww I thought Bella asking Edward was cute! :P and OMG lmfao Emmet is Halarious I think this is my fav chapter it was so good can't wait till the next! _

More plz this story is realy good

you are a genious

omg

The point of view change at the end is confusing

You are a genius. How do you write things like this

Amazing chapter! I'm a little confused about the part at the end... I'm sure all will be revealed. I can't figure out who it is though... and it's nice that Eddie's finally grown up... sorta... xDDD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

Great chapter i cant wait to c wat happens nxt :)i who was tht at the end... i hope it wasnt edward

Hi I started reading this last night and could not stop (I sat up until 4am reading only stopped so I could set some sleep) I can't wait for more.

Ok I just found this story...gotta say, I love that Bella is a vampire already! Don't like the wolf interactions though, just really hostile and cold! And Maria and Victoria really need to get their due!

I'm a little confused with the ending of this chapter. Who's that talking? Edward?

The rest was very good. I like that Bella and Edward had some alone time, and that Edward had a talk with Jasper.

Thank you.

TMOT :)