this is so good! at first i didn't understand it, but now i totally do! that is so beautifully written and i love it! it is absolutely awesome! wish i had writing skills like that...

That was so sad... yet so sweet. I feel so bad for that little Pichu.

Though I'm a bit confused. Was the Pichu killed after Dusty met her, or was she a ghost or something?

It was written very nicely. Great job!

Aw...That's so sad. You're a great writer and you MUST have a great heart to write something like that! That was just so sad...Nice job! Favorited! ~Furyfur

Another excellent work. Yes, it is depressing, but very emotional and well-written. A great addition to your collection of stories

This is an amazing story. It is rather depressing, especially at the end. Though I greatly enjoyed reading this. I'm very glad that you were able to find this story. This now one of my favorite stories of yours along with the "My Little..." stories. You are truely talented and are an impressive writer. Keep up the good work!