Reviews for Brothers
FireStorm1991 chapter 5 . 9/10/2019
I love how they just admitted it to him XD Until next babysitting event!
FireStorm1991 chapter 4 . 9/3/2019
Ah, the sore subjects...well, nothing a little training can't fix. lol
FireStorm1991 chapter 3 . 9/3/2019
Wait, why didn't Tarble know he cashed in on the freebie and freak out now? Did he forget the incident with Vegeta while half asleep? lol...I probably would.
FireStorm1991 chapter 2 . 9/3/2019
Ah...the differences of time. lol. Such a funny chapter, totally acting like a family and all XD
FireStorm1991 chapter 1 . 9/3/2019
I read this story years ago and don't think I ever reviewed, but I'm reading it again, and I just want to say I'm excited about it :)
eriv del chapter 23 . 2/17/2019
JESUS bless he loves u prayin 4 u
theAsh0 chapter 23 . 8/12/2018
Thanks for such a cute story!
The end was a bit anticlimactic by I had a lot of fun reading!
theAsh0 chapter 15 . 8/12/2018
In still enjoying this very much but with all the talk of food I have to ask.. If they don't have contact, wth are they eating in there?
Amethyst Spear chapter 14 . 1/5/2018
This story is 100% awesome and accurate in my eyes. I just love stories with all the Breifs family just hanging around and getting in trouble, it's just that they always forget to add Tarble and Tights. I love how Tarble and Vegeta interact with each other. It's the Vegeta way XD. Anyway, I absolutely love your stories and how you write and since I'm a beginner, I'll definitely want to learn from the best authors here (your one of them :3). I'm glad I found this story and you and I hope you keep on writing buddy.
tess4aria chapter 23 . 9/18/2017
This was awesome!
Kitty in the Box chapter 23 . 4/21/2017
wow. what an amazing story. I'm glad that the brothers remained non cheesy. it's the best that can happen really for them and realistic enough. I love love love the way you depicted Trunks here. you really balanced his parents' personalities in him so accurately. I think Bulma was a bit too intrusive but I get the intention for it. Gure was nice but she did come off as distant and too goody goody for me. it almost felt one sided that Tarble likes her more than she does him.
Butane Baby chapter 9 . 3/26/2017
Wow. I have loved this story from the very beginning. The way you compare and contrast the brothers' past histories, using the characters' voices, is phenomenal. It's also interesting to read how Vegeta and Tarble show empathy for each other. In this chapter, I like how Vegeta prioritizes his concern for his immediate family, making it clear that won't sacrifice their well-being, even though he's committed to helping Tarble.
multyfangirl21 chapter 10 . 3/19/2017
LOL. The hilarious awkward scene of the older brother having to give his younger brother a version of 'the talk'.
multyfangirl21 chapter 8 . 3/19/2017
Poor Vegeta, I'm not sure if this is worse than when Vegeta would have helped Piccolo get Gohan through puberty or not. With Gohan they could have a break since he would be going home.
Ooh , it's going to be worse in about 2 or 3 and then 4 years later when they have to deal with Trunks going through puberty and then Goten joins him.
multyfangirl21 chapter 7 . 3/19/2017
I looked, I wished for ,and then found the kind of story I was looking for.
Heh , the older two princes are living a small part of Gohan's life. Father figure to the younger brother, and baby sitting the younger kids.
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