This was so sweet. I always love seeing Yuffie from Vincent's POV. Great grasp on their relationship and their characters. Well done.

Vincent loves her! I love how tender you made him be with her! Also the Reno thing was hilarious! I can see him breaking Reno's face if he touched Yuffie!

Oh dear, I cried after reading that. So emotional (:

What a talent you have for writing, this story is very descriptive and I absolutely love it.

- Y

Aw, that was very good! :)

Ah, how sweet. There was an "Aw" moment at the ending where the two get talkative; nicely done!

*fangirl screams and melts into a puddle of fangirl goo* I LOVED it!

A beautiful representation of their love! :)

Great story! I like how you didn't make them say 'I love you' at the end, in a weird way it wouldn't have sounded right! You can just feel the love they have! Great job!:D

Ok... I'm officially your fan girl. This is beautiful, cute and hot all at the same time. Misson accomplished!

Read it on LJ, but favin git here, it so damn cute I can't believe it!

Great one shot! I love the wording and everything! Great job!

First off, this: "This baby was almost in its entirety for me."

I felt so happy reading that : ). Bravo.

This piece was interesting because it most certainly was a sex/fluff scene, but in the intimate moment that only lasted 30~ words (so much information in such a short time!) I felt like I got a good look at their new delicate relationship and the tone was hopeful, anxious, and completely giddy at once. So congrats on that.

Now my criticisms (because I always have some). You had some awkwardly worded run-ons with A LOT of separate ideas going on (not that I can talk, but you know...):

"He finally leaned forward and was aware of the way his dark hair contrasted sharply with her pale skin as he nipped lightly at her collarbone, listening as her breathing quickened and her hands began to raise and settled on his shoulders."

and

"Just the skin on skin contact lulled her into a sense of peace, and every time she would trace the pads of her fingers lovingly over all the scars that he had thought made him physically unattractive."

stick out as examples. So maybe break them up?

Also, I found a sneaky typo:

"and where he planned -theto

I know that you like to jump between character thoughts, but since Yuffie is asleep for most of the piece (so you spend most of the writing in Vincent's head), the two paragraphs where you take a look at her thoughts on the matter sort of stick out as a bit odd. Not critical, but it struck me, so I thought I'd comment on it.

And Yuffie's refusal to lead Wutai also stuck out. Since taking up the torch always struck me as her in-game intention (might be crazy). But I suppose it's possible to read her lack of mentioning Wutai in Dirge as something on that level. Just some character bits to think on.

For the most part though, another job well done. I am as impressed with your ability to write so much with so little as I am with your ability to turn one-shots into ten-shots (not even being sarcastic or anything).

Thanks!

That was really cute and beautiful; in fact, you're a really great writer - keep writing and you'll be one of the best writers in the world. _

Omg! This was pure fluff and smut! (my personal favs ;P) Congrats on another awesome awesome awesome ficlet! Love it! Love it!

Tori

that was hot Vincent and yuffie are the perfect couple. good story!