Oh gosh, that ending seriously got me! This was so interesting to read; it’s clear you put a lot of work into it :)

Absolutely amazing, you have such a way with words it made me tear up. Even without mentioning Zack and Clouds names, you were able to describe their characters so well. Loved it.

Aw, Aerith and Zack are so tragic. Lovely insights into how Aerith may feel.

This had me tearing. This is very beautifully written. You captured something extremely deep and complex about Aerith, and her relationship with Zack and Cloud. I'm very fond of this pairing (three way, ZackxAerithxCloud, probably because it was so bitter sweet), and I also agree that Aerith loved them both in different ways. It made Aerith into this very strong and yet fragile person, with her own problems and doubts (instead of always being the know-it-all girl that wasn't afraid of much). You captured well her character development.

The ending sentence hit me hard. It was short and dramatic (like your story), and had just the right amount of impact.
Good job!

damn... there's ninja chopping onions in this room as I read this

damn, just damn, breathtakingly beautiful story.

What a gorgeous, heart-rending piece of work. You write beautifully and with a powerful voice!

Best ZackxAerithxCloud fic I've ever read, period. I'm a big fan of that whole love triangle and write my own fic on it, but I've never been able to capture the essence quite as much as this fic did. It's lovely.

I love how you compare Cloud to one of Aerith's flowers. It totally makes sense. .

Love it! It was written beautifully and I could vividly imagine everything you described. Great job on this!

Absolute shivers. This is a beautiful study of Aerith and her relationships with Cloud and Zack and the Planet and how they all differ and interact. Loved it. 3

A real good look at Aerith's character, I very much enjoyed it!

wonderfully written :) You use language beautifully and it really gave me such insight to Aerith's character. It was an interesting effect how you don't use names, but I liked it a lot. You're a great writer!

The dialogue between Zack and Aerith is fantastic. Great work

This sumarizes both perfectly and beautifully Aerith's life. Your portrayal of her is wonderful, strong and yet fragile, just like a flower. And the fact you mention she loved both Zack and Cloud, sth many people don't notice, adds realism to the fic.

Beautiful one-shot. It was so well written. Keep writing because you are so very talented. Thank you for posting that!