I wish you would also write a story for Leah and Caleb I so want to read how that relationship would progress

Seth 3

Hey

can't really say much feeling really sad rite now cause of the stillborn baby

it's so sad, probable worse for me cause I have a still born brother how would have turn 1 last month

anyways I like this story so I'm going to read the rest now

just hope it's a happy ending

and oh yea I think your writing pretty good (much better than mine) thx for making this story

So sweet. I love it!

I know I've dissed this story but it's amazing, except for spelling errors and stuff like that.

Actually, her pain feels like my pain. It might just be because I love Seth but anyway, her pain is my pain.

That's a huge compliment coming from me, it might not feel like much to you but it should be, it takes good writing to make me feel that way.

Good job )

I just want to say that, if he's hurt I will be VERY VERY UPSET!

Okay. This chapter was easier to rea and I'll kepp going )

It's a good story.

I'm not great at english but I think there were a few grammar mistaces, and that made it hard to read sometimes but... I'll give it a few more chanses and I'll tell you on the next chapter what I think :)

This story WAS AWESOME can u please write another one, that involves Seth n Carrie having children

Yeah! I love Embry stories. He is my favorite. Post Soon!

aww...im lookin forward to ur own story tho :)

Wow, You take critism really well.

Very impressed. Can't wait to see the rest of the story :)

I love your writing... flawless style.

I just don't like the character, Carina.

Bella from Steph Meyer's books is someone we can relate to... It seems this Carina is good at everything.

:)Other than that, You own

x

WAH!

:P

haha! i like this chapter. very funny. wen i say lol, im literally Laughin Out Loud! well not that loud. im tryna cotrol myself cos i dnt wanna wake anyone :P maybe lmao ;p i was actually Laughin My Ass Off! ahaha...

i love this. the characters do sound so real ;)

wait...is this the very LAST chapter?

i love chapter seven :P 5 stars for that.

chapter 8 is really sad well at least til the part end...

I too think that they've gone a long way in a short lenght of 8 chapters ...

i saw ur last post u said two more chapters to go :(( sad...i lyk this one

but im lookin forward to ur original story :)

my mum didnt tell me and my bros she had a miscarriage. but my dad on d other hand blabs bout it out in random and none of us blieved him til lyk a year ago wen my mumfinally nodded... if its true then the face she shows every time my dad mentions it is the face of pain. shes not sayin things bout it. but if its true then i understand how carrie feels. ive seen it in my mum (too dramatic) but wat i hate is if its true den how cn my dad b so insensitive? i mean the way he says it is like its NOTHING, no big deal just another come and go stuff. i hate him -_-

LOLS to ur bestfriends ;P