i loved it very much! please update soon

I love this story! Please continue!

JACK
DOMINATING JACK
EVIL SADISTIC JACK
JACK

This is SO RAD I can't even! I don't believe you mentioned the name of the lady elf he's...um...courting? Dealing? Wheeling? THERE'S A SLANG WORD FOR IT I'M SURE! Moral of that rant is, I love that touch! I don't know why but it adds a bit of mystery to it and it works SO WELL!

And her reluctance but secret want like I just WOAH THERE it's lovely and you rock!

SafyreSky

Holy chiz. I skipped the 'Jack Frost as Santa' chapters so if those have anything to do with what I'm about to say, that's why. I just realized that this wasn't the 'Rise of the Guardians' Jack Frost...O_o

#1 love it!
#2 cant wait
#3 plz add lemon ;p

I swear if you dont post another chapter im gonna cry. PLEASE KEEP POSTING I LOVE THIS.

If you dont finish this im gonna cry FINISH KKEEEPP GOING

Wow... At first when I check out your profile after you alerted my story I didn't know what to think of this story. I usually don't read one shot but thought what the heck, I saw the Law and Order: SVU with the guy who plays Frost saturday so I was pleasantly surprised to find this. As I kept reading I really enjoyed and really wish you make more in a sequel or whatever. Can't wait to find out!

Oh jack u can do anything u want to me *sigh*

Oh jack u can do anything u want to me *sigh*

you should add more to this...

dude

how interesting

pretty sure i spelled something wrong

lol

hmmmmm

Mmm love it. But I feels like it needs a ssssuuppper steamy sequal eh? ;)

this is a great story! plz continue it! maybe even add a lemon?

its coming good :) please write more