heh, glad to see someone saw it my way :) i really like the way you wrote it, it's... poetic :)

You actually made me discover Arthur/Lancelot. It reminds me that, indeed, in the movie, it can be seen this way. Great job.

Wow. This gave me chills.

Not being a fan of slash, I honestly decided to read this on a skeptical, if slightly curious, fancy, and I am glad that I did.

You are correct in saying that the movie certainly insinuated perhaps a deeper relationship than friendship between Arthur and Lancelot. Whether or not it was intentional, you have painted a highly believable picture of what Arthur might have been feeling towards Lancelot and how he dealt with his death. Very intriguing and thought-provoking. This was skillfully written, and really made me sympathize with Guinevere, even though I found her character to be somewhat annoying in the movie.

Great job. Thank you for this insightful piece.

-Lairiel

Well I've never thought of Arthur and Lancelot this way, but I have to admit you worded it beautifully.

This was tragic and moving, especially since I just watched the movie again.

I LOVE this! I had thought that ALL the A/L fics were finished and done! I LOVE how you portrayed Guinevere, not at all like the movie and even the actress portrayed her as! POST MORE A/L ASAP!

Love ya,

Sam

Quite insightful and interesting. Well-written, and I especially liked this sentence: "Her husband was in love with ashes on the wind, a wind that had already traveled far beyond the shores of Britain." Good job!

Very well written. It was interesting to hear Guinevere's "voice" as you don't find it much in fanfiction. I liked her sadness at her predicament and the way she accepts the situation. Nice job :)