Dum dum de-dum
...really?
beep beep be-beep works so much better. That's what onomatopoeia is for after all.

A wave of panic washed over Ron and he stepped back reflexively, causing a pile of rubble to collapse with a loud crash and a bang. He grimaced, stopped short, and looked at the mess behind him
With perfect simultaneity, Drakken, Shego, and Kim all struck their foreheads with their palms and shouted in unison, "The goofy sidekick!"
Ron crossed his arms and put on a sulky expression.

That's just perfect.

Cute! :D loved it!

That was marvelously gut wrenchingly hilarious

Really funny story, loved the twist on the episode and everyone’s confusion/conclusions :D

that was just a weird story. Not much else i can say

RonHeartbreaker,

This tale combines outstanding storytelling with first-class writing, moving themes, top-notch characterizations, and sometimes hilarious humor. The story’s range of words to chapter shows how a writer can condense a tale into a piece that is extremely enjoyable to read and that is a classic written feature universally loved by online readers as pointed out by many of the reviewers. This ranks among the truly exceptional body of works that constitutes Kim Possible fan fiction and is a story that is one of my favorite picks as one of the best released to date from you.

I do wish you would have taken it a bit farther for a few more chapters but you did pick a good point to end the tale. You could actually pick up from here and take it further if you wanted too.

As to your author’s notes at the end…

That was a great tribute to the effect the reviewers had on your story. Often the influence of others has a direct bearing on the quality of ones work. Sort of another point of view which opens up a whole lot of possibilities. Giggle. In the end, of course, you are still in command as the author but it sure helps a lot when ideas all click and a story all comes together.

Again, thanks for the read even though it has taken me a while to get to finish it. As always school work first, being a kid second and reading and writing fan fiction when I have time third. Look forward to your next work.

kt

I think you're selling yourself short with this tale, RonHeartbreaker...I think you definitely could have gone further than this without too much hassle, though the deus ex machina of Wade Load would have had to arise some time to get things put back to how they should be. Having it pop up when it did was suitable for where your wanted to take this idea :)

Nice quick ending... Pretty much tied everything up.

Would be kind f interesting though to see the differences in what Ron/Kim and Drakken/Shego do to try and recover their memories... Ah well...

Until the next...

Nice little story. Like the whole crazy confussion mess. But the ending part make me smile. Good job!

Danny

LOL! I like Shego's reaction at the end of this chapter. Off to the next chapter!

I wonder how much trouble Shego will have robbing her next bank. In her current condition she might mistake a a toxic waste dump for a bank. I'd hate to see her make a withdrawal there. Lucky Shego isn't the trusting sort or Wade might have actually tricked them.

This was great. I loved all their attempts to work out their relationships to each other and their reasoning. The jokes were great and I especially like the names Drakken was coming up with for Kim. Awesome job.

Well all's well that ends well.. I think?

Each is now left to go off with their 'significant other' to continue to figure out who and what they are overall, and to each other.

Does look like Kim and Ron have some ground to make up there about their affections for each other, but the groundwork is being discovered with each step they take together...

Loved the short romp through memory loss and gain.

CB73

At one point I wasn't certain how far you would run with the concept. You picked a good point for the end.

Loved the bit of Drakken not being able to hear Ron's name, but my favorite bit of dialog had to be: “Kim Possible! Assuming that you think you’re all that, I’d just like to say – despite the lack of empirical evidence one way or the other – I’m quite sure you’re not! And…you…boy…well, you haven’t seen the last of Doctor Drakken!”

Long chapters? You have me confused with someone else. Seven chapters and around seven thousand words? I have a thirteen chapter story with thirteen thousand words. I'd saw we're even.

Thanks for a fun story.

KiY