| Reviews for Need Her |
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CrayfordDresden chapter 1 . 7/20/2013 aHHH Nice |
Nia chapter 1 . 1/6/2010 Very sweet fic God bless |
donnaone chapter 1 . 7/9/2009 Just Beautiful |
bluehorserunning chapter 1 . 6/17/2009 's is only used for a possessive or a contraction; plurals require s only. It's *really* distracting to have grammatical errors that basic. |
Willowbeone chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 that was so sweet and gentle loved it |
mhgood chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 Very nice! You have a tendancy to write your plural nous with a possessive apostrophe, thereby completly changing the meaning of most of those sentences, but this is an easily fixable problem. I'm adding this to my C2, "Oh, for the love of Spock." |
Dr Spleenmeister chapter 1 . 6/7/2009 Brilliant piece; I'm a big fan of introspective writing and you did this beautifully. |
Josie010 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 Beautiful! |
DiscoUnicorn chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 Aw. This is so sweet it makes my tummy hurt! I love it. Great fic. |
spectravel chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 I like that Spock sought out comfort from Uhura. Very touching. |
Mrs.Moony86 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 That was really sweet. I love that Spock allowed Uhura to comfort him. Terrific job on this story. |
Chucksrus chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 Awe, that was so sweet. Great job, you! |
mykardia chapter 1 . 6/6/2009 it's really good and sweet! well done! |
dreamcatchr2009 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009 *sigh* So lovely, and it left me wishing for more! Only one critique: about 90% of the apostrophes were unneccesary, as many of those words were plural, not possessive. But such little things hardly matter when the heart of this story shines through so brilliantly! |