Bruh he copped a feel LMAO LMAO LMAO

I'm kind of dad that you killed off Haku.

I really liked your version of her very well written, but I find Naruto on your chapter not thinking of her to be a bit off.

I found your going to continue this as it's been shelved for years. but, either way I just wanted to say that it was extremely well written and I'm going to follow and favorite just because it's fantastic.

nice

Too much paranoia...

I need to create a list of dropped novels and fan-fictions so I cab avoid getting done in by the summary, I thought sarutobi does something different but I can already guess this will be exactly canon with an angsty naruto

are you going to change anything from canon or you just gonna be a sadist and make naruto's suffering as horrible as possible

It's been over 6 years since you updated, it sucks to see a good story abandoned.

I enjoyed this :)

The very fact you feel the need to justify your writing invalidates it and makes it even worse. The scene was violently gratuitous, the man's motivations were shallow, two doctors shouldn't have refused in a row to treat Naruto yet it happened.

This was cliché and more than that, it was horribly justified cliché.

Oh God, this has to be one of the cutest most precious depiction of Naruto as a child I've ever read. I cried reading chapter 2 and 3. You really know how to transfer the emotions to the reader.

grrrr sarutobi ill break ur neck for lying to that poor child

I like this. But one thing is annoying me. Naruto is not older than the people in his class. In fact, he's younger than Sasuke. I know failed the academy twice but he just started early (atleast I think he did)

damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.

LOVE THIS! I hope you come back to it someday! Thanks for posting! :D

I think that you wrote tsunade's character quite well and I think you will continue to do her justice. Naruto's confusion, well I would suggest that after he gets over his shock/paranoia over having the pair of them watching over him get them to have a conversation where they help explain to Naruto about him being a jinchuriki after all if they know the old man then they must know something about his burden. And I think they will also help keep him on track and not go too far down a dark road.
Personally I was really liking the Naruto X Hana thing that was going on and if he returns to the leaf village (and if tsunade and shizune will help him do that) then I would really like for them to carry on like that before getting together, or close to it seeing he is paranoid. But in the end that's up to you.
Looking forward to the next chapter if you ever continue this story.