That was really good! Especially for your first time writing a yaoi and a lemon. You are a very talented writer. :)

"If you don't like it then tough luck! I love you anyway!" I think that was my favorite part. It was kind of funny yet perfectly displayed his stress and nerves and desperateness. (Is that even a word?). Great job. It's better than a lot others even with the lack of experience.

Most likely the hottest thing I've ever read... *slow claps*

I loved it!

Such an amazing fanfic! 3 IT WAS SO SWEET!

Very well done! That was so hot, and really the only thing that was ooc about it was Kyoya's confession (and you have to have *some* kind of a catalyst to get something like this going.) Well written,and very hot ;)

I really enjoyed this story. Yaoi and a lemon is hard but you did justice to the characters and I could feel the emotion of a first time. Zander should be proud! Thanks for writing!

ARE YOU SERIOUS?! IS IT REALLY YOUR FIRST LEMON AND YAOI?! No one would tell! I'm a great fan of lemons from these two, and this one was the BEST ONE I've read so long! I can't believe it's your first one... maybe it's so good because you read lots of these as well? XD. Anyway, I absolutely LOVED IT... you have a fan here :)

Aww, lovely :]

Extremely cuuuuute almost wish there was more lol

Please pick me up off the floor 'cause I've melted into a puddle of goo. I can so see this. And thank you 'cause I adore this pair and want to see them happy together. Props to you as a writer, too, for getting past your "shyness" to write with courage what you really wanted to write. That's not easy. Ever. I'll even go so far as to say that despite not really knowing how these characters would act in this kind of situation, they felt IC - and that's the highest compliment I can give. Gold stars and a big sticker to you!

This was your FIRST?! You are amazing and awesome. I enjoyed all of it! Totally my OTP for OHSHC! I looooove it! Haha.

Loved it! No other words are needed to explain! XD I definitely ship it pairing, I will never stop loving them!

Wow! I mean just wow. I think this was better than some of the stories written by more seasoned fanfictioners. The suspense was killing me, not to mention I had to wait till I was on breaks at work to read it. Oh if my coworkers only knew. Its really hard not to squee when reading good fanfiction!

Wow. I loved this.
Maybe a little too much.