I do like the story but it isn't clear due to no breaks between scenes and the grammar/spelling needs to be worked on. Some words have missing letters or some sentences actually didn't have the word "with" or stuff like that. This story can be awesome if it is more fleshed out.

I love this story

Wspaniałe:) Bardzo mi się podoba to opowiadanie. Pięknie przedstawione postacie i fabuła nie wlecze się - ładnie wszystko opisane i treściwe. Podobało mi się przedstawienie Harrego - z początku krew zalewała na naiwność chłopaka, ale z czasem wyrobił sobie kręgosłup. Powodzenia z czasem i weną do dalszych opowiadań.Pozdrawiam

Happy ending yeah!

Liking

Just a quick note on American vs British. Is it pub or bar? I think that the term pub is used more generally in Britain, could be wrong though.

Great story, I loved it. Very sweet, but sad and dramatic. Keep up the good work.

This story has me somewhat confused at times; lot's of strange train of thought and messed-up grammar. Yet, I am reading it, weird, eh?

Thank god for happy endings!

I hate how ostinate and cruel the Weasleys are being; its one thing to support blood family, its quite another to baby an adult so much that she does grow up and expects things to go her way...

Sounds like its going to be a war with Mrs. Weasley!

Awesome story

You named the baby after me! That's my last name. Loving the story, but then, I usually love Ginny-bashing fics where Draco rescues Harry from her evil clutches.

this was so sweet

i wa wrong but at least vernons going to get it