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The World in Black and White chapter 6 . 8/8/2013 Love the chapter! Really great story and I hope you update soon :) |
Blissfulnightmare chapter 6 . 8/15/2009 P.S. Update soon! :) |
Blissfulnightmare chapter 6 . 8/15/2009 The sad thing is, I absolutely understand how his mind is working. Lol, does that mean I'm insane? I have been told that I'm disturbed...but I,ve also been told several times as well that I look a lot like Luna Lovegood...hence my randomness to come. First of all, I love the little ironies you put in there as well as the morbid humor. Second of all, in the beginning, Harry slit one wrist but later on it was said that it was two; (just my opinion) I think it was just a little too dramatic when Harry was ranting and everyone was in tears. Third, is this going to be a weird love triangle between Snape, Draco, and Harry? *giggles* That'd be awkward. lol. If not, who's wearing the pants in the relationship to come, Draco, or Harry? I also have an idea for a cute little love scene that I'll give you permission to use since I doubt I'll be writing or posting all (or any) of the stories and ideas I have locked away in my head - if you like the idea, that is. Here it goes: Depending on who you want it to be, one of the boys is really upset about something - insert drama or what have you - the other boy holds him close and tightly so that he can't escape the embrace and rant, (one arm around his waist and the other hand cradling/pinning the boy's head to the other boy's chest) the boy eventually gives up struggling and just sobbs into the other boy's chest, and, exhausted from his little fit, finds the other boy's heart beat - as well as the vibrations that are made through the chest when the other boy softly speaks comforting words to him - soothing, and finds warm security in the embrace . This lulls him into a sleepy state, the other boy kisses him on the head, and the boy either falls asleep in his arms, or is carried to his bed (no sex scene). As the boy sleeps, the other boy either softly confesses his love to the boy, or add some angst by having conflicting thoughts and feeling about the boy and have him wonder what just happened and what their relationship is now, and what not, or whatever. He watches the sleeping form, and can only conclude for a fact that he cares for the boy. Sorry that you had to deal with my nonsense, but I was too lazy to put my thoughts of the scene in proper sentences. If you like this idea, I'll be happy to help you with the scene in more, better detail (if you want) and we can form some kind of contact plan via e-mail. If you have a good idea on what to do with this scene, that's great (but give me some kind of credit for it of course, 'cause that would just be rude not to, lol). If you think it's garbage or you just don't want to use it, just tell me. This may be the biggest review that I have ever given... |
mrscakeakajane chapter 6 . 7/27/2009 Harry my sweet don't worry i have arguments in my head all the time, you should only start to worry when you lose said arguments. Well done Dray and Sev for helping Harry escape. im glad harry is on the road to recovery, now he can start tormenting Dray and Sev. i wonder if harry can still do a tickaling charm ;-) i look forward to the next chapter jane |
mrscakeakajane chapter 5 . 7/19/2009 great chapter darlen. i love it when story's have Salazar in them. and ar so lovely he told Sev he had a nice deep silky voice. Well if Harry hates the hopital wing perhaps he should move in with Sev and Dray so he has someone to look after him keep it comeing jane |
Kamey Rynn chapter 5 . 7/18/2009 *grins evily* I'm likin this ... |
mrscakeakajane chapter 4 . 7/14/2009 you totaly haven't disaponted. a great chapter, if a little scary how messed up harry is. i look forward to more |
Rocker-Chick-12345 chapter 3 . 7/4/2009 I like this! :) Update soon |
Femalefarrier chapter 3 . 7/3/2009 your mean I am really enjoying the story, please keep going! Anna |
mrscakeakajane chapter 3 . 7/3/2009 you stoped you bad bad person you. just for that im not going to read the next capter... ok im a crap liar too. i'll be waiting for the next chapter soon please |
LucifersDemonAngel chapter 1 . 5/26/2009 good story so far. update soon. |