That's sooooo cute :3

I was hoping for the "scene", but I was sorely disappointed. You need to write another chapter with a bed scene btween Ed and Al.

Tearing up OMG!

Poor Al! SO HOT! nice job!

Alphonse might not have gone through puberty, but Ed didn't spare him from the 'Talk' because of that. Al knew what lust and love and sex were. Ed had told POOR Al lol Got the "Talk" At like six!

WTF HE HIT AL WITH HIS AUTOMAIL BECAUSE AL BROKE IS JACKET THEN thinks "not apologiziing didn't do anythihng wrong"

this fan fiction is messed up.

ed would not be able to tell if he fixed it with alchemy.

I will admitt this is a VERY well written fic, but quite rediculous

oh my gosh you make ed and al over dramatic and winry a heartless cheater. w. t. f.

ohmygod you make them so overdramatic no offence but gosh why is al so worked up about the armor thing anyway?

you make them wimps both ed and al ._.

It's well written and the ideas are complete :) some words are missing but that doesn't take away from this story at all! It makes me wanna read more! I really dig this lol and and this is so kawaii! thanks for posting

Hahaha, this made me laugh. A little sentimental value as well with the two other brothers. I look after my little sisters but only if they really need it. :P

So cute.

BWAHAHAHA Al went back into the closet XP This was really well writen, everyone is really in character. I enjoyed it

...um, I do like ur fic... but I can't say for the ending

Sorry

I think u could have put more into it

Sorry for being harsh, but I have to be honest

Roy has kids

aw, how cute

lol, he became just like Hughes

With Riza no other else...oh, that's... very complex

Wait, I still dnt know if Ed has some feeling for Roy or not!

Damn the ending was harsh!

He should have just use alchemy

Although then again, I thought maybe Ed kinda deserve to rip Ed's jacket

I mean he threw away Al's armor

That meant alot to him

Look I may seem like a bitch when I say this, but that seem fair to me

Love ur fics ;)