Reviews for IN THE DARK
megumiA chapter 10 . 10/25/2014
Oh no man weres the sequel?tryin to find it but cant..c'mon whats gonna happen next? this is like deja vu moments with main characters being almost like twins,even better! Update soon!
ZeroRose90 chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Hi there! I know u havn't updated in long time so I don't know if ur even looking this account. Bt i jst wanted 2 let u know that I hav really enjoyed reading this story over & over mainly due 2 the interaction between the 4 main characters. I really hope that u read this & mayb think about continuing this story becoz it really is very gud & interesting. Thank u for the hard work uv put in2 this story :)
Ryan chapter 10 . 8/14/2010
The story is coming along nicely, but some character traits are rubbing me the wrong way. Zechs in particular. It's him in name and relation to Relena only from what I'm reading. If there's a good reason for this behavior pattern of his, I recommend including it in the story ASAP.

It also doesn't seem quite in character for either Heero or Sousuke to swear so much, despite the circumstances. (I recently watched all of the FMP anime, so I can confidently assume this to be true for both of the guys.)
Ryan chapter 9 . 8/14/2010
And the worst of circumstances happens again. The kind that arm slaves and mobile suits can't stop.

Like they said, it's war now. Not that Leonard and Varga aren't already dead, but now it's official.
Ryan chapter 4 . 8/6/2010
Woah, woah, woah. Wait a minute. What the heck is Treize doing among the living? With the presense of Preventer and Lady Une as its head, this takes place post Endless Waltz. Treize died at the end of the TV series so there's no way he can be alive and well here. I do hope you explain this soon as it is a Grand Canyon sized plot hole.
Ryan chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Well, here goes nothing. Normally I don't read crossover fics if I have not seen one of the stories involved. (In this case, FMP.) However, I love Gundam Wing and after recent exposure to the Super Robot Wars W game which has both FMP and Wing in it, and thus character interactions between the two casts, I figured I'd do a little research and read this anyway.

I am liking the set-up so far, and being a follower of your Cyborg 009 and Speed Racer fics, I know you'll do the characters justice.
Winter Knight chapter 10 . 7/25/2010
It's not a haft bad story at all I like it. Good job.
SilverIceDragon03 chapter 10 . 6/13/2010
This story is absolutely incredible. When is the next chap? Oh! Did you hear about Shoji Gatoh making 2 more novels? I read about it on Anime News Network. He's currently working on novel 11 now. It's gonna be called "Always, Stand By Me Part 1" Then the last one will be right after it. No title for it yet.
Tani2 chapter 10 . 4/10/2010
A delightfully angsty chapter. Good ti see such a nice update. Look forward to through the labyrinth.
Jen23 chapter 9 . 3/4/2010
You two did a great job again! I liked Kaname's comparion with Stallone in "First blood". Later I was glad that Relena showed up just after Varga got away, because Heero needed her. I can't blame Heero for being as upset as he was. I loved when Sousuke told Heero not to talk to Kaname rudely. Then when Sousuke threw a punch at Heero and they continued to go at it, I was glad that Kamame had found a way to stop them. After Relena helped Heero get the chemical out of his eyes, the scene in the guest room had some serious passion. I had to laugh as Kamana almost drown Sousuke. Then when they were wrapped up in each other, I laughed when Heero told them to carry on. Too bad Vargo got away with the girls at the end, but Heero and Sousuke are going to let him have it. Awesome, awesome chapter!
Tani2 chapter 9 . 1/8/2010
Welcome back and happy new year! Glad to see another chapter. Very exciting! The pepper spray scene was awesome. Laughed my ass off! Look forward to seeing the rescue efforts! Well done as always.
Tani2 chapter 8 . 11/29/2009
Very cool! I was so glad you updated, and I certainly look forward to the next chapter. Looks like the story is winding down now. This will remain one of my all time favorite FMP fics. I hope that once it's finished you keep posting more stories!
Jen23 chapter 7 . 11/9/2009
Great job on this, but I expect them from both of you. I loved Sousuke and heero conrolling themselves in the beginning of this chapter with their girls. It was sweet. I'm glad the couples were fine when they saw each other the next morning. And of course I liked when Heero said no one was going to hurt Relena as long as he's alive. Tessa knows now that Sousuke does have real feeings for Sousuke. I love Heero and Sousuke working together and protecting their girls. Now Kaname really knows who Relena is. Later I was glad that Heero went after Sousuke for Kaname. Like the thinking with the other head comment. Things are getting serious. I'm looking forward to the "Pursuit". Great job!
Tani2 chapter 7 . 10/9/2009
Dude! I'm so glad you finally updated! And a very nice chapter too. As always, I love the exchange b/w Tessa and Sousuke. I think it's great how you have her telling him HIS judgment is clouded due to his emotions...classic pot calling kettle black scenario. In addition, I'm glad that Kaname finally opened up to Sousuke. And Tessa taught her a way to block him out, but I now wonder if Relena is truly a Whispered. Guess time will tell. Well, good job and look forward to reading more, hopefully soon!
happy reader chapter 7 . 10/7/2009
This is a crossover that has been waiting to be written! And you two are exceeding expectations, thank you very much. :) It's truly refreshing to read your fic!
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