I really hope you finish this off soon, I know it's been ages since you've updated it and you might have lost interest, but I still would love to read the ending. I've really loved the whole story (in fact this is about the third time I've read this) and I'm really eager to finish it :)

I thought this was a great story that showed the development of Tom and B'Elanna's relationship slowly from the beginning.

I know it's been years since you updated, but I hope that someday you do.

just a small comment on your excellently written fic...

What happened in Time and Again was 'reset' so it actually never happened and no one (except for Kes) had any memory of it.

Hi, I know you're not much into this fandom anymore but I was wondering if you'd be finishing this fic?

I really hope you do. It's a great story and would hate to see spoiled because it's unfinished

Wow. Ive read all the other chapters, in a row as well, and I cant wait for another update.

Its really a wonderful story. What I enjoy more is that you write the characters in a way that they sound so real to me it makes me happy, I mean, you did nail them. This also makes me nostalgic because it reminds me how much I liked watching Voyager no matter its flaws. What I most love about that series were the characters and you got them.

I specially like how you handled the "duplicates" thing, that talk between BElanna and Harry was lovely (when she was touching his face all the time because she couldt believe he was there after watching "him" die). I got emotional with your re-telling of The Chute, that part where Harry realised what hes doing to Tom and then standing up to protect him, wow, that is the Harry we love!

Im sorry about your writer's block. I hope it goes by quickly.

It would be sad if the story is left without an ending because its wonderful! :)

Great story indeed! I sat down and read all the 20 chapters in a go! I'm a big fan of Paris & Torres

I loved them and I'm so glad that it started after "Faces", that's one of my fave eps of Voyager and that was the one where I realised there was more of Paris than the cocky, arrogant pilot.

Great interaction and I enjoyed all of the Tom-Harry's dialogues.

I hope there are more chapters of this.

Good job!

I sense HELL about to come down on the Vidians

Yay, an update! This one was great, no matter what you say. Can't wait for the next chapter, though I'll be sad to see this story end. Poor Tom...it's a wonder he can still function. Update soon!

Another nice chapter.

I'm sorry that you've had writer's block. I can understand.

This chapter moved quickly, but it wasn't too rushed. The reader was able to understand the emotions and the intents from what you gave us, without endless repetition.

I can't wait to see how you finish!

I'm so glad to see this story back...thank you for promising to finish it for all of us dedicated readers and fans!

Yay! An update! I really enjoyed this and I'm really looking forward to the final chapter. :)

Great chapter, felt sorry for them both. Hope Voyager finds B'elanna soon.

Ack! You can't just leave it there! Please, please, PLEASE, update soon. Things have got to get back UP hill so that these two can get their act together.

Ep! So, I just sat here, after putting my daughter to bed, and read the entirety of this story so far...and I can't WAIT for the next update! I love love love Tom and B'Elanna and loved watching the development of their relationship in Voyager. Watching it on a deeper level through your story is incredible.

Definitely looking forward to your next update!

Sorry I didn't review this great chapter right away, but RL has been busy.

I love the way you used Voyager lines and added to them, especially the Tabran Monk line. I also like the twist you put in. It, obiviously takes it AU, but it feels like it still fits with the characters and the Voyager universe.

I can't wait to see what you have planned next!