Great story. All we need is the next part. Maybe Marcus ends up leading the Rangers?

Great story and chapters. Jennifer Baratta

you know, some people might say that a traditionally romantic relationship would be out of character for these two, but i like them anyways. i can see people changing drastically when they are hurt just enough. that said i love your story! i can't wait to read more. the only thing i have against it is the lack of narration. the dialog is very good but its missing the cream filling. lol. more soon pleaz! _

~HIKARi

Very nice progress in the story. Looking forward to more.

Is that the end? Cause I feel unloved! I need more! Ha! Great story!

Very good! I'm so glad you (and Susan) are giving Marcus a second chance.

Nice! Want to read more!:)

Oh a Marcus story!

I love these and it's been a while since we've had one. This first part is well written and I look forward to future chapters.

I like this! Some constructive criticism though: while the first half is really good, the second seems rushed, there is no direct speech and important are dealt with very quickly, it's also a little hard to follow. When you use direct speech, you do it really well: these scene comes really alive and your characters seem pretty much in character, so I would love a bit more of that next chapter (That I hope will be up soon!:))

This was very good! I hope you'll consider continuing the story. I'd like to hear about where Marcus goes and what he does next - and if he and Susan ever manage to get together again.