Culuzuzubaba...what? That's a very confusing and long name.

Keep up the good work, but can you stop writing it in bold and italics? The story is really cool.

Do not be afraid? Why would he say that unless he's either laughing at them or knows they have good reason to be afraid? I'm wondering if there might also be something in the closets? In Japan closet doors are kept completely at night closed so nothing can get out. This would make a good forum thread!

That was great!

Tails seems fascinated by the age of the house. I can see him getting into architecture. Too bad he didn't check this Caluzuzubabakikijorog out before dealing with him. Sounds like the name of a demonic being. They may want to get back in the car and get out of there.

That was cool, you had four mistakes though. Good job.