Are you planning a sequel? One with Hannah, perhaps? Where she has to rescue her 'parents'?

well hurry up please

thers only one chapter left

theres still more bodys i watched the movie

so pam is dead in the movie the friend was dead

this is going to worse before it gets better just like the movie

i was wondering how this story was going to work with kim being able to kick ass most the time

are we thinking the one where the guys daughter ended up on the black market as a sex slave

i saw the movie taken it was pretty good

I love this story just as much as I love the movie it's based on. I just have 2 questions:
1. Whatever happened to the epilogue?
2. Now that "Taken 2" has been released, have you considered writing a sequel?

Good story.

But where is the epilogue?

Enjoyed the romp through the city of Lights and Ron knocking some folks lights out-permanently. Kim is back where she belongs, in his arms. Looking forward to the next chap.

Quite the body count Ron left behind to rescue Kim from those slavers. Maybe 'Paris', as usual, will not appreciate the work Ron did to rid them of something so unsavory... but that's the norm for them.

I wonder though, did Kim ever wonder what kind of work Ron was into with his job...? It appears she now has seen his work firsthand. That's got to unnerve her a bit.

Ron, though he has saved Kim, seems to be tossing what he's been doing for a living around inside and now knows why he retired.

Now the loose ends get tied up.

CB73

Nice fight scene Doug, for some reson I seem to like them edgy. A pissed off Monkey Master/Ninja going after his beloved. Are you sure that you don't want Ron to pay some of the other guests a visit too. I mean Kim would just love to take a few of those out who latey were bidding on her 'services'.

Thanks,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

Fantastic chapter. I can't wait for your next chapter/epilogue. I'm really looking forward to it.