Wow this story was so awesome! I read all the chapters! I mean it was just like so funny. I couldn't stop laughing. Every chapter was hilarious, really. Please write more stories like this! You are a great writer!

Later!

Lol, good chapter. *grins* this should be fun.

Grammar.

It is a thing that makes a story decent, as well as readable. However, as your story lacks certain aspects of grammar, it is a big, steaming pile of .

Do not think it is the grammar alone that makes this such an eyesore (whilst bad, it's not /that/ bad), for it is not. Oh, no...

Have you ever heard of description? You know, that thing where you tell your audience what the surroundings look like? Or how about that other thing where you tell us what the characters are actually doing?

This...'story' is made out of dialogue, and nothing but dialogue (with the occasional weak attempt at description, which in my book, doesn't count). It's boring to read, and doesn't flow. Take it down and add some description, for God's sake.

-.-

George

INTERESTING STORY!

ITS OVER! D*: NOO! I liked it a lot! :)

Shadow being forced to dance. lol! And vectors plain ride must have been horrifing! XD

Vector! XD What a scare for sonic! :P

YAY! They got back! :D

So very nice.

And that's the end! I really enjoyed this fanfic! Hope you make a new fanfic soon )

Let Tails have the bananas, Sonic. That way, if mosquitos show up, they'll only bother him. Blaze decided to stay there? I'd like to see Espio and Charmy's adventure that Espio hated and Charmy liked. Great story! I'm going to miss seeing new chapters.

That was funny how Sonic could swim until Vector told him he was. Sonic wanted to stay until he remembered he couldn't get any chili dogs in the Amazon. But Amy sounds mad. Maybe he should stay there and hide.

Why can't they go home yet? What does Sonic still want to do there? And why did Blaze put them in the Zooma Trance?

Will they get out?

It was... Who?

I can't believe Shadow couldn't even make a fire! That made me laugh!