The first time I read the previous chapter (and censored) on another site, it was four years ago, I still remember how disappointed I felt and angry i was.
I did not have a taste for "more" but of "deprivation".
As if someone took my plate before I eat my dessert.
(You really do not want to be around if anyone ever do this to me)

Here you did a great repair for it. I'm really happy about it.

I remember reading a shorter and censored version on another site.
Do you remember my response?
I'll remind you:

It was beautiful ... I was so sorry it's over. It was all so short

You evil, not let me come Oh I'm mean let unto them come! What was I supposed to do? - Put in another coin? I think you could stretch it all night.
I understand that you love the formal matter sentences, but the most beautiful sentence in this story was actually:
"If you wish to spend your last night on earth with me then lead the way."

I could actually see them enter the room, and there are quiet in the air and Kirk takes a bottle of alcohol and they get to know each other "in every sense possible" as far as the night went on ... even more than once . (winks) What do you think?

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Why do not you tell me about the "Directors Cut" ?

Hahahahaha that's pretty good :) I love it!
DH

I just saw the moive again with my mother a few hours ago and than I found your fanfic ...I had a feeling there was more to the ending then what was seen and you just porvided that for me :D

thats just so darn cute XD

The manner in which Kirk gave references was amazing!
I love this fic .

awwww! i love this two toguether, continual soon please!

ohhhh i loved it soo much awsome

Aww! *flail* I'm sure that's EXACTLY what happened :) I haven't read K/S for awhile (other than my own crap) so this was just perfect.

Thank you for the hotness and for the inside joke.

-Spirk

Excellent! I love how they used moments of pleasure against each other.

HELL YES! super amazing awesome spectacular and wonderful!

*giggle*

You see, that was like...fucking hot *_* Specially that two lines.. :D

BTW, I was listening to Tron soundtrack while reading and it somehow the music just made a perfect sync with the story; a but slow at the beginning, speeding up when needed...just perfect xD Like your story ;)

I just saw a super cute cartoon of Jim and Spock saying those exact words in a similar context.

Nice job.

LOL, hilarious! Thanks for sharing )