interesting story but the end is really sad.

Damn... that was the best wrap up I have ever read.

Make an alternative good ending, please!

Solo bad ending? Would you like to restart

Cool story. Wish you had finished it though, instead of writing what happened later.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You can't kill of shino hinata ino and everyone that's complete and utter fucking bullshit
after all they'd been through that's just it disgusts me

I am saddened by this but I understand why you did what you did.

Hm. A disappointing end to a good concept. Then again, my reading was half-hearted after Naruto became Death.

Q-Q what a way to end it. Definitely creative, I'll give ya that. Shame though, woulda been nice to see it through, I'm satisfied though. I look forward to reading some more of your work :]

mmmm

Kaito is hungry want to eat

Pretty fucked up but not all stories are meant to have an happy ending

HAHAHAHAHAHA very funny with that DP joke. XD

dude u made naruto DEATH didn't u because thats bad ass.D

NOOOOOOOO couldn't you at least put in a Good Ending where everyone doesn't die? Hahas :D

Hey there

I'm actually not sure what I should think about this chapter and the end of this story at all.
I mean okay I can see how it could come to this, but I mean for it to end this way I'm at a loss for words and not sure what is more gruesome: to die while you know you killed all the friends and loved ones you held dear in your life or to know you were to powerless to rescue and protect them or to hope you'll be reunited with them and don't know if it is possible or not, because you still damend to wander the lost earth your home as the fox.

And I'm not sure if the song "One way or another" which I was listening to the whole story through was a wise choice from my side or not.

Sorry if I ramble but I'm offical at a loss off words.