I really liked this 'fic. It has my two most favorite FF pairings. 3 The story is short but I loved it. I really like it when Edge and Rydia tease each other, it's so cute! xD I hope you write more, especially ones with Edge/Rydia or Locke/Celes in it.

I love the way you wrote Edge and Rydia's interactions! So funny and so true to their personalities in the game! Bravo!

interesting story so far