This is an awesome story, and I'm on tenterhooks about why she would be chasing him like that! Please, please come back and write more!

Aw, I just realized when you last updated this. It's a shame. I hope you do update soon, though- or at least release a synopsis of what you had planned for this story. It's absolutely brilliant.

Is that Rose at the end?

Thank god. I got terribly nervous when he saw Donna.

As for the ending... what?

Ahh, so we're delving deeper into the Metacrisis' experience in the parallel world- looking forward to more information.

Looks very good so far.

Intriguing start.

Sigh... I adore this, I really do. It is so wonderful to read a metacrisis doctor fic that is so unique and not a generic love story between rose and himself (if that makes any sense). I also love that you brought Donna back into the story. I hope you update this, because it is wonderful and I would hate to see it unfinished!

O.O Epicly awesome, but so so sad...

I thought this was an excellent story, though I think it might have worked a bit better with 11 rather than 10, that's fine for now.

oooh. I cannot wait for how the real Doctor is going to react to all this. Doc is way over due for some ass kicking if that flashback was anything to go by. And why is Rose Tyler alive? So many questions and I cannot await more chapters to find them:) Fantastic.

Please update. I'm so curious about whats happening!

Aarrghh! Of course, I notice after I've begun reading that this story hasn't been finished and hasn't been updated in over a year. I do hope that you consider either a) finishing this story (my personal preference) or b) posting a synopsis, so that we aren't left hanging!

You definitely have a gift for turning a phrase and writing for the characters. I've been able to visualize your story in my head clearly, with very little need to read back over what was written in a previous paragraph. More simply, your story flows along very smoothly. Love the alliteration in the chapter names, by the way.

Formatting: I would suggest adding some sort of visual separator between story elements, to aid transition between points of view. Even a simple horizontal line would be helpful.

No matter if you finish this story or not, thanks for sharing your writing with us all.

Please, please come back and finish! This is FANTABULOUS.

You genius, you. This is a masterpiece - masterfully written, masterfully imagined, with an ingenius plot and brilliant characterisation. "Epic Doctor Who extravaganza" springs to mind.

I hope you get a chance to update soon - your readers want to know what DOES happen.

(...Making terrible puns is a withdrawal sympton)