Great Story!

Hello,

I thought I should point out what I see to be a rather large mistake. Rodney suffers from HYPOglycemia - low blood sugars. If he suffered from HYPERglycemia, he would have consistent high blood sugars and constant eating would be of no help (it would in fact make the situation quite worse). I felt I should point this out considering I am a diabetic and am used to both directions, and have a friend who suffers from the same condition Rodney does.

Otherwise, lovely story, and quite interesting that you had Jennifer punch a computer monitor (I'm assuming a CRT and not an LCD) to jump start their relationship.

And of course I must applaud the ever-present and ever-matchmaking Colonel Jonathan Sheppard.

~H. A. Jackman

Great story! Loved how Rodney and Jennifer got into the fight at the beginning and then John helped Rodney fix things with Jen after. Very cute ending!

Enjoyed the story very much! Loved the image of Rodney carrying Jennifer...*sigh*

You are doing a great job of writing McKeller, please keep them coming! _

Great story. I like how Rodney and Jennifer chased each other around, but eventually ended up in the same place!

Thanks for the positive press :)

I loved this when I was beta-reading and it's still great.

Welcome to the world of McKeller!

DW

Still love this! I like how Rodney was worn out after the emotional stress of being kind. Poor Jennifer though, I wonder what's going to happen next...

I don't usually go for love stories, but this has just the right level of angst and clueless Rodney to keep me hooked! Thanks.

I love it.

Please keep going.

DW

Very good so far. Please continue.

Awesome!

MOAR! MOAR! MOAR!

Bring on Seductive Rodney!

What are Carson and John going to do? Please continue.

DW