Reviews for Stargate Ragnarok: The First Rule
KyliaQuilor chapter 7 . 11/21/2011
Another good one.
albert12 chapter 7 . 8/29/2010
I have greatly enjoyed reading this episode- I found it skillfully written and attention-getting. I was on the proverbial edge of my seat reading the pilot episode.

Two things I have noticed, though- aren't the Fenir using too hard a metal for their fletchetes?

Also, isn't a P-90 a bit of underkill for a creature like the Fenir- wouldn't something like the AA-12 or USAS-12 with armor-piercing grenade rounds work better?
Rune Landel chapter 7 . 8/24/2010
Ive finally finished reading Ragnarok, or at least what you have released so far. I really hope you continue writing this series as it is perhaps one of the best I have ever read. And I've read a lot! A curious question, I presume SG 27 is going to that 'base' that was talked about earlier that the brits wanted to build? Anyway like I said, loved the story, so I hope you don't give it up...there are too many great stories out there already that have been abandoned, so please don't join them!
tpx1 chapter 7 . 9/13/2009
great story so far!

please continue soon!
Aspeo chapter 7 . 8/25/2009
I have really enjoyed reading the first two installments of the series. I would gladly read any more of them if they were written. The Fenrir are ferocious, and I hope you have an idea for defeating them or at least some armor to protect the SG teams. I have also enjoyed the "technobabble" and I can't wait to hear more of how the Vanir tech will help in the defeat of the Fenrir.
Scyphi chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
Should you write a part 3?

Uh...yes. :p

But I can understand not being able to get to it right away, too. :)

Anxiously awaiting Part 3. :)
jwhennig chapter 7 . 7/19/2009
A great second chapter to an intriguing story.
Alys5 chapter 7 . 5/7/2009
Loved the story, the Red Dwarf comment made me laugh! I would love to read more Stargate Ragnarok. Why are Taylor's team no longer part of the SGC? How are they going to defeat the Fenrir?
sh777 chapter 7 . 5/7/2009
I have enjoyed the story so far. DO continue.
Hadrian Alterranus chapter 7 . 5/7/2009
Excellent chapters and very well done! To my knowledge, creating a second/third asgard race has not been done before!

Please start on a part three because I definitely want to see how this ends. Will Earth be able to find a solution to the Fenrir problem? Please continue soon.
Alys5 chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
Poor Llewellyn, there's always one one each team!
Hadrian Alterranus chapter 4 . 5/4/2009
My compliments on another good chapter.

Don't apologise for taking a bit longer to reply and update! It's extremely rare for people to update almost daily, most take at least a week or (a lot) more. So it doesn't matter to me if you happen to take a few days, it's still faster then just about everyone else;)

I'll wait and see what you've got in store for us soon enough then. Cheers!
Alys5 chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
This is well worth the wait. I love your teams and it's good to know that Jack O'Neill agrees with Taylor. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Hadrian Alterranus chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
Once again 2 very nice chapters!

If Im reading this chapter correctly you are implying the Gleipnir system is not of Asgard origin because it's predates any knowledge the Asgard had of singularity manipulation? Interesting idea, I'd love to see where you take this.

I love the speed of your updates, I hope you can keep it up.
Hadrian Alterranus chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Good work! I like your writing style, please continue updating.

I hope you've got a few surprises in store for us; hiding asgard, new weapons and tech, new allies. What ever it is, I do hope that earth will start to make a serious effort to expand and professionalise their interstellar activities.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next update.