awesome

I have to admit, when I first started the story I wasn't expecting anything. But after I read it through I loved it. Shame you discontinued it.

hey, if you want, I can take over for you.

I truly hate you for not finishing this. it was that amazing.

End of the current story ... darn! Know it's been a while since your last update HosekiDragon but if you would PLEASE finish this story at some point I'd love to read the ending! I hate Kaz hating Chaor cos I know it wasn't Chaor's fault and I hate that vampire twerp Von Bloot not getting his comeuppance!

Love the story and hope you write more soon!

I just KNEW Chaor wouldn't be that evil to Kaz! This makes so much sense now and I can't wait to see Von Bloot get his richly-deserved karma! Love your story and will keep reading till the end!

I loved your entire story. I'm sad that you discontinued it. It was very good!

This is one of the best books I've ever read! Great storyline, lot's of suspense, lot's of action and drama! You've gotta keep writing!

hey this is awesome do another chapter keep it up I'm tingling with excitement

! I need to know what happens. hurry and get the next chapter done. HURRY!

Took me about 3 hours or so to read, this was defintely worth the time. Great story telling, and very interesting story arch and plot devices. Truly unexpected and very vivid. Good Job Sir!

can you teach me the language?

I LOVE this story. You have to keep writing it. Yoour on my fav's!

I lvoed that chapter. Poor Kaz.

Holy KARP KAZ!

Oh great. D:

Can't wait for more!

~Tala