not enough detail

What an interesting way to explore this couple!

Funny and so much like Shikamaru ;)

Simply perfect!

What are you doing to me? What's this warm, fuzzy feeling that's making me feel all good and giddy? I reckon that's the power of a well-written Shikatema.

Totally unique! Though I don't quite understand, it's totally hillarious and entertaining :P fave!

aw, dorks in love:)

So cute and funny! Favorite Already!

Congrats to this awesome piece of work.

Very cute. ;D Unfortunately sex isn't a verb, but Tema's so nice she let him win... 3

That was good. Bit rough in some places but you managed to tell an interesting little blurb of those to interacting.

Spelling checks out. Grammar looked alright but there were some spots where I think the wording could be improved the clarity and readability but overall good job.

Completely in character, clever and unique! I don't know what else to say. I loved every bit of this.

I really enjoyed the concept of this, and the entire conversation about sex being a verb. It sounds very Shikamaru-like, which was an excellent touch.

The story was really well written and vivid, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. :D

This is really good!

love this so much. i wish alot of the longer ones had them this much in character. D: sigh lol

this is awesome. It kind of made me laugh cause Shikamaru was like 'I'm right, I'm always right, so you have to look up to me and trust whatever I say'. And that made me laugh. Anyway, keep up the good work!