I loved it. I also like fighting with lovemaking. So sexy.

I'm loving your sasunaru pairings Hun. Keep writing!

Whaaaaa? You don't like sasunaru? What is wrong with you?! Lol jk, it was good and incredibly hot...but seriously SASUNARU 4 EVAAA :3

Wow! This was amazing! :D I utterly loved it!

AWESOME! I'm new here so excuse me if I'm a little creepy. :)

OMJ, NARUSASU, I'M THERE *Is a narusasu fangirl*...I hate sasunaru, but...this was vary good, even if Naruto was bottom!

-Clair

I'm not a yaoi fan, but I liked the aggressiveness in this piece. Thanks for sharing.

wow! I do lov it so bloody much!

Tho, its sad they couldn't stay together - eather way!

Nice Lemon! The fight scene was pretty good also XDD I loved the ending, Naru’ll take top next round haha! I liked that Naruto realized Sasuke wouldn’t be coming home for a while and yet still decided he would wear him down XDD Great story!

Midnight Mourner

They'll never

know who I am

Sexy. And very good work!

-The Epic Writer :)

Really good! Great writing style.

I'm sorry, I think Sasunaru is better. Naruto's more innocent and clueless about everything, while Sasuke is more serious and not-so-innocent.

But this was amazing. 10-10

Ha ha! If anything, I can totally see this happening. I don't think either of their relationship skills warrant for a "soft, gentle, and sweet" sex life. So, I'd imagine it'd go like this.

For someone who doesn't like fight scenes or SasuNaru, you did a very awesome job. XD

So, thanks for the read. I love it. You rock! :)

Definitely a very good one.

It was really nice, and the fights were quite realistic, even if the sex scene was a bit surreal, but good anyway. Smut is always good, lol.

Keep writing!

Ooh that was brilliant! Definitely the best sasunaru I've ever read! I love your writing so much! -Yasu