This is very sweet and well written. I love the way you captured Jessie's hesitancy and innocence. You make me miss this show. Thank you

Just found this story. It's beautifully written. You handled writing all the members of the family very well. I'm excited to see your take on Jessie and Katie.

Amazing...hot hot hot!1

This is the most romantic and erotic fanfic on J/K. I loved it...

No teeth! NO TEETH! Bad idea, it hurts!

Loved this story! Thanks a lot!

I would like to echo others' sentiments that the unedited chapter was better than the edited chapter. In fact, it was one of the better pieces of erotica I've found on ffn (and, for better or worse, I've read several)! You definitely needn't be embarrassed, for it was skillfully executed.

Moreover, the work as a whole did a good job (IMO) of capturing the frustrations of trying to navigate relationships, social dynamics and trying to find private spaces and times while in the throes of high school.

Encore!

You ended this very well. I'm shocked I didn't read this earlier, but I noticed it ages ago. Still, my favorite line was- "You are incredibly sexy and incredibly beautiful and last night you were absolutely perfect. Okay?"

Its very heartfelt and considerate. Katie asking if Jessie basically accepts her view is very sweet. This was a very nice ending. I'm glad you wrote the story and dealt with real issues or acceptance, family, love, eating disorders, etc. Nice job.

I liked this chapter. Sad that this fic is over, and that there's no sequel. But I really enjoyed the ride. Thanks for a marvelous story.

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Im quite glad to see that a fantastic fic like yours,ended with a chapter as good as it all!I dont know if I have mentioned that before,but one of the aspects of your writing that I like the most is the elaboration and creativeness of your dialogues:they emphasize the personality of the characters and give the story a dynamic that is way pleasant to read.I must also say that Katies jokes were always amusing - which is exactly how this character must be explored.I also enjoyed how Katie sweetly reassured Jessies confidence.

A sequel would be excellent!You could,for example,describe how Jessie would come out to her parents,as well as their reaction,and a possible "freedom" for both of them after the revelation...or you could just continue the story as you normally would;anything that comes from you is worth reading.

And thanks for mentioning my name - I can help but feel a bit proud about it,hahah!Anyways,it was a pleasure to read your you can still write some well and keep writing ;)

the reviewer that was me a time or 2 does a happy dance for being recognised as one of many.i really enjoyed your story and think you brought it to a very good conclusion.i personally dont think a sequel is necessarry but another story would be awesome!it would be a shame for you to nstop writing after doing so well on this so i would like to look forward to another just to let you know there was a really good video made for the yahoo group. if you want to see it let me for now

Well, I'm happy that you found our reviews so invaluable. This was a nice way to end it. I think I would have preferred to see Jessie come out to her family about her and Katie and how they'd react to it a little bit more. As for how any other stories by you would be received, I think we'd all welcome them. I know the feeling of how great it is to get reviews, and how it can make you crave for even more. Since there are no plans for a sequel or any other stories in the near future, maybe you could return the favor for my stories.

Hey,Im glad that you have posted the unedited chapter:it is,as I thought,even better than the original!The details were realistic and offered a better point of view of what theyve done together;besides,it all seemed more complete after the added more,youve exceeded my expectations.

I hope you can post the last episode soon - Im eagerly waiting for it )

I'm really looking forward to what reactions they will get when they leave the tent in the morning.