Wow I do NOT mean to sounds creepy in any way, but the Boston Tea Party is an amazing ride. I was wondering why this chapter felt super nostalgic to me! Anyway, years since you've finished this, but enjoying the story immensely

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This was an absolutely fantastic story :)

This is a beautifully written work and the YYH fandom should be incredibly grateful to have you. Love the foreshadowing you include in you’re writing.

I like this but Hiei is really domesticated

I loved this story! Your writing has improved since it was written, but the plot and everything in it is amazing! Have you thought of rewriting it? My favorite part was when Hiei kisses Shy the first time. So sweet, so innocent, so cute! Looking forward to reading the story after this one as well!

I absolutely love this fic, and I think I actually might be crying the end was so beautiful. The best way to start off my birthday honestly. Everything was so emotional that I feel like I've almost been left in shock. My only regret is not getting to see Hiei with children.

I can't believe it's over. Let me say, the two extra chapters totally faked me out; I was 100% not prepared and I think, in its own way, it might have made it better.

I enjoyed a lot of things about this - even though it does still show its... Age, I guess. Your newer works are definitely more well-rounded, but considering you started it in 2009, I am honestly impressed. Definitely better than anything /I/ was writing at the time.

I liked that even characters that I don't care about as people the way I do the main group - Disma, Mecca, Epsilon, as well as even Tau - they were all characters I ended up caring about anyway. I teared up when Tau died and he'd barely been around for minutes. Not to speak of the the way I felt whenever the Raion would show their faces, wow.

I think my favorite part of this story ultimately was the plot. I liked that we started with something so off-handed as two friends arguing over a magazine and it eventually turned into Shyle and Hiei, mated for (a very long) life. I enjoy stories where someone comes from ordinary circumstances yet still experiences something extraordinary in the end, and that's really what happened here in my opinion. I was working myself up anxiously about Shyle's short lifetime until the ritual was revealed, and I have to say that I enjoy that, as well. I'm just so happy that everyone came out of it happy in the end. Every scene was one I was excited to read. (Also, Shyle spraying Disma with the disinfectant is something that I enjoyed above all the others, I'm not sure why!)

Most of all, though, it really is nice to see how much you've grown and how far you've improved from this. I think you're very talented and the fact that you're still writing for this fandom AND writing fics that I love to read is a great joy to me. You're amazing and I can't wait to see what new things you may come up with in the future.

Yay

I really love Urameshi's character and his relationship with Shy! Ok I'll not ship them... who am I kidding, pair that awesome hoe with everyone in YYH world! She deserves it! :D

Daamn I really REALLY like Shy. For a moment I thought she was in love with Kuwabara and felt jealous when he said that Yukina could cure her. And I dont think Shy is a shallow person, she's realist and got a bad time. Like seriously everyone concerns about Keiko made me feel sad for Shy. Like *you're a strange nigga, so no one cares about you* Well hope she ends soon with my pretty and attractive -damn attractive- fire demon! Love your fic btw!

Hiei is being occ :(

I'm a bit confused with the sudden changes between chapters 21 and 22. It would have been nice for you to ease into the whole move. Also, I really liked the story up until Hiei started showing interest for the OC. I thought he was too OOC. The story is progressing, but I feel like a few chapters back that it was progressing at a more faster pace than necessary. Overall, I like how you started the story out.

This chapter felt a lot like a filler episode.

I like this story, it's great. However, I feel like Hiei took a leap to soon. I could see it taking longer for him to make such a drastic decision as dating/courting a human. But it's still good.
I love the interrogator Yusuke scene! Poor Hiei! Haha
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