MAKE A SEQUAL!

Every chapter was so kawaii and worth my time! This is definitely the best mattxnear fic I've ever read! I LOVE IT SO MUCH HANDS DOWN YOU NEED TO GET AWARDED I SWEAR HEAVENS! I'M excited for the sequel too! I never actually knew I'll get so hooked up and reading 2 chapters straight, and even reviewing! ( I barely review, only to those who deserve ultimate mega trophies for being to good and as far as I know I've only reviewed once 0.o) KUDOS TO YOU! KISSES AND FREE COOKIES FOR YOU FOR MAKING SUCH A PERFECT STORY THAT MADE ME CRINGE IN PITY AND JUST CURL IN A CORNER WITH TEARS AND DIE BUT ALSO SQUEAL SO HARD LIKE A PSYCHOPATH FANGIRL FOR TOO MUCH LOVEY-DOVEY! YOU REALLY MADE ME LIKE THIS PAIRING! :) :) :) xDDD

i tried my best to make the banana talk, i really did! but in the end i got so frustrated that i smashed it on the computer desk and had to eat it :(. it tasted good though.

This is an awesome story! Love it! 願上帝與你〜！

okay so i LOVED your fic, and im so glad that i found it all written and complete _ i thought it was sooo good that i would reveiw it extensivly. p.s. - when i say i HATE something that doesnt mean i dont like it (the writing,grammar,blah blah) i mean i just dont like where the plot is ATM,cuz it sad or whatever. so since there is so much to remember i made notes, based on the chapter. so thats how im gonna write it! _

NOTE: this reveiw does contain *spoilers*

chapter 1: the pants idea was genious!

chapter 2: LOL near says 'later babe' HILARIOUS.

chapter 3: OH NOEZ! matt gets beat-up!

chapter 4: gahh! never again can i EVAR listen to that song again! EVAR! lol hawtdawg,he creeps me out!

OH NOEZ! matt gets molested!

chapter 5: love panic! at the disco yay!

matt and near share there first romantic err accident?yay!

chapter 6: poor matt! i really hate mello! ._.

GUMMY BEARS! - hey since its like ONE day after halloween when i was reading this i went to look for gummy bears in my candy bag and i had some! and i re-enacted nears scene *snickers*

i loved near's 'personal treatment' of matt! lol i dont blame him!*snickers again*

chapter 7: HILARIOUS! good job near locking matt out!

lol i love the title. 3

lol at mello's huge freak-out!

chapter 8: near is so mischeivious! _ its cuutte! tho i wish he'd have glued the elephant to matts foot instead.

SEQUAL YAY!

chapter 9: quotespongebob?no? didnt think so.

lol i liked matt's 'head up seven-up' sleep pose cuz i sleep like that ALL the time!

i dont think the scene breaks are retarded .

chapter 10: love the title. hmm,i wish matt were on the menu ;_;

LOL at the kiss! it twas perfect! tho what made it was...near pissing his pants for real.

chapter 11: love near's lego-city senerios!

chapter 12: AHHH! i want to kill matt with his denial!

chapter 13: nothing of paticular intrest.

chapter 14: nothing of particular intrest.

chapter 15: LOL matt goggling at near's legs.

matt says 'crack-a-lackin' that made me crack-up!

matt and near's banter and names 3

also it was a good idea to make near pansexual,relisticly i see him as asexual, buut that would be no fun.

AHWW MATT DONT CRYYY!

cutte! they cry on each other.

MATT KISSES NEAR YAY!

chapter 16: GAHH! i hate matt and his denial this chapter!

lol near's reaction at rainbow boy!

AHHWWW PUPPY AND MARSHMELLOWS SO CUUUUTE! . x.x

mello's getting suspicious...nuuu the suspense is killing me! ._.

chapter 17: OH NOEZ I HATE THIS CHAPTER THE END. I CRIED!

chapter 18: i love the ripping off the gummy bears head to represent near's anger for matt.

i dun leik matt in this chapter ;_;

chapter 19: AWWHH matt said 'i love you marshmellows...' finally.

lol mello yelling at near, "ARHARHARHARH!" it was quite funny.

yay! mello doesnt kill near!

cruel world. now near and mello have to work together! (i wonder why they have to take care of a baby to learn how to be L's sucsessor?)

chapter 20: lmao at naming the baby. genious!

OH GODD! love mello and near's conversation! .

April 3

well thats all! hope you liked it! i sure did! and also all the writing inbetween that i didnt mention was just amazing too! my thanks to the authors 3

CANT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEAL! 3 - rachel-

awesome so far!

thank you so much for writing this! i really hope you write more of it sometime. i'm putting the story on alert just in case!

I know this is weird but when u said " sleep took near slowly" it sounded kinda dirty. So yeah it made me luagh thanks!

:( Near come on! UPDATE!

"...there was a single chocolate kiss" heh.

Love how you've written Near. Also love other things that I'm to tired to properly review, but yeah! Awesome so far; totally looking forward to reading more once I've slept. And after work, ugh.

AWZ! X3 The end of the chappie was soo kawaii!

Lol nice! 'Later Babe.' that was the funniest thing I've read almost all day! X3

Pants rock, man, pants rock. Love the story so far! X3

Why didn't you make Matt paired with HawyDawg? would have been amusing possibly lead to conflict and humorous. Especialy since they have to spend two hours together a day. Possible near-rape...well not Near...but you understand what im saying. XO

Great story, really.

Can't wait for the sequel!

It'd be cool if Mello fell in love with Near too during this "baby appointment"