This really is amazing, finding these types of stories are hard.

This is so beautiful oooh author huwaaa i cried

Woowww. Beautiful plot and world building. The way you linked all your words together wow I am stunned. Thank you for this. Tsuna’s tattoo was a cute idea and it made a difference in the story. Very nice.

Thank you so much for writing this. It is a piece of art. I love it so much. Thank you :'))
(On a side note, you might want to change the word breathe to breath. Its a small error, but i think it disrupts the beautiful flow of the story.)

I felt that this should have had a sad ending, like Reborn was not able to stop them from walking away and take Tsuna, but on the other hand, I want Tsuna to be happy. Silly me.

I like the way words take the stage, and remain a big part of their world. Even if I had to double check that it said they eat the words, that was unexpected. I love this story, because the world building really sweeps you off your feet, and it feel like you are soaring on the clouds along side them.

Aaggh! My heart dropped at the end there! I seriously thought Reborn was going to run off with some woman and leave poor Tsu ;;A;; God he's such a convoluted asshat... but I love it XD Oh well, things turned out well anyways~

i read this a very very long time ago and I always come back to this story whenever I think of it. Love the way Tsuna never gave up because he knew Reborn loved him. Loved the fact that the women Reborn conjured was probably a female version of Tsuna and Reborn was probably thinking of him. Loved the ending where Reborn made the right choice in the end because he's possessive and determined not to lose Tsuna again. Absolutely lovely

Sequel

So, I kind of wrote a fanfiction for this? Not with familiar characters, just the universe. I like it, though. Do you want to see it? Can I post it as a fanficton of this?

DAMN, that was good! People often seem to underestimate mythic or fairy tale formats because they're generally seen as children's stories these days, so it's a rare pleasure to find a tale that truly FEELS like something from a legend, like this one did. It was a joy to read, it really felt like I was reading magic.

Oh my goodnesns this is beautiful!

Do you have any other stories about this AU? It's gorgeous O.O

That was different and amazing. 3

Wow