thats cute(:

i love uuuu

I like this story.

Woot! I love it when direct references from the games are used!

a man

that has feelings

for another girl.

Lucrecia must really

love him then.

i like this.

i can relate to her,

i was once there.

very good write.

Aw, this is cute! I think you're using an interesting theme with the Tarot card. I can't wait to see what's in store for them!

AWESOME~!

I really, really like the way you write, and I did enjoy this chapter but I think maybe it went a little too fast- it went right from Yuffie being upset to Vincent's confession of love- perhaps we could see the weeks that Yuffie was missing from Vincent's pov, just to balance it out?

I'm glad Yuffie and Shelke have made peace though. I hate it when people focus on them hating each other.

I really do enjoy this, though. I love your Yuffie-voice. :)

Great story. I look forward to seeing how you proceed. Please update soon.

I really enjoyed this, I don't know anything at all about Tarot catds but it's an interesting idea for a theme. I don't think that Vincent and Shelke could ever have a romantic relationship but it must be hard for Yuffie to see their friendship from the outside. Looking forward to more.

Using the Tarot cards for themes in a collection of oneshots is a really great idea. I've seen alot of oneshot collections that don't really use any kind of themes and that's okay, but your collection looks to be more promising. I like to see how all of the cards themes relate to their respective oneshots. This first chapter was really well done. Yuffie was a little angsty, but it was fitting and not out of character for her to show such emotions. Also, showing Vincent through Yuffie's perspective was a nice touch. As far as Shelke goes, I think it's always interesting to see her from Yuffie's point of view; however, she has almost become a whipping boy for the Yuffientine fandom. She brings a definite unknown element into any romantic entanglements that Vincent may become a part of, but please don't fall into the Shelke is the Queen of Evil stereotypes. Also, I love the fact Shera was the one to find and comfort Yuffie. She's one of the most forgotten characters of the series, but also one of my favorites. Keep up the good work.

reli good! plz update! please!

I thought it was awewsome! I do feel sorry for yuffies suffering, but the turmoil between yuffie, herself, and vincent always makes up for a good story line. Kodos on finishing the first chapters.

Aw, this is sweet. I actually cried a bit, too! Please do continue.