Great story!

so sad this story ended, I really enjoyed it.

I absolutely do not feel bad for Edward, he abandoned Bella and wanted her to move on as if he never existed and she has he may not like it but he made his bed, as they say. it most certainly doesn't excuse his behavior. he is just a little boy, he needs to grow up! Jasper should have ripped him apart.

Your author's note amused me as I was most definitely not hoping it was Alice.
My favourite stories are the ones where she's dead )

I am crying... Beautifully executed story! The wedding had me in tears and the last scene raised goosebumps. Truly amazing.

what kept me interested? Alice. Alice and what she knew.

pleeeeease

don't tell me Alice planned the phone ringing

ha! I like literate smart Emmett

Awesome!

Jasper was 19 when he was changed. Youngest major in the confederate army... I like the story though, very well done. I only really dislike the chin length haircut you gave Bella. Very modern, but will it be in a century or two? I always loved that she had almost waist length hair... Anyways, I'm just going to ignore your description of her. I look forward to reading more!

Me gusto mucho el amor sincero y creíble que tuvieron, espero que algún día hagas una secuela o un corto.
Y me encantaría que tuvieran hijo o hijos jajajaa solo una sugerencia

from the bottom of my heart, i loved this story so much . thank you for sharing!

This was a great read. I loved the character development, even if I wanted to maim Edward for a while there. I think the relationship kept me reading more than the suspense of dealing with Ed then Maria. Liked the ending too.

Ugh, I kinda hoped it was Victoria. Maria is scarier to me.