| Reviews for Hiding it from the Council |
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   thegrison chapter 7 . 7/1 Ok but needs work. There are a lot of errors or you just throw canon out the window. Good try though. |
| Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 10/10/2019 Crap |
| Borello chapter 8 . 12/24/2017 damnit. the story starts to get interesting and you stop the story. |
| gamerjamc chapter 8 . 4/22/2011 good story hope you are can update soon |
| Serial Peacekeeper chapter 8 . 9/1/2010 Awesome story i hope you update soon! |
| EbonPurlight chapter 8 . 8/30/2010 death to danzo burn melt and bury his ash's |
| Stormrune chapter 7 . 9/3/2009 Well I must thank you for this little story. I loved the fact that he is already married and with children. Fuck those little bitches of the village. None of them deserves Naruto. The only thing that I don't personally like and I don't mean offense is that I find this Naruto a utter and complete retard. This chapter especially shows it, unless of course is a part of this fic or a charade. This chapter showed us that in any moment his enemies can attack his family (and it doesn't matter how well they can defend, there's always a risk of dying) and he even said that he has more enemies in the village than out of it. So my question Naruto has a plan, like be Hokage for a minute to complete his promise and be gone with his family? Or will he stay endangering his family in that village? Despite cannon Naruto being stupid, your Naruto looks a lot smarter and I don't want to think that he will endanger his family just because of the idiocy of being Hokage. That or ordering to kill several people (evil laugh). Anyway I'll wait for the next chapter and see what you do. And before I forget, don't get offended, I still like this fic and if possible. Can you make the chapters larger? tnks, and see ya |
| super12 chapter 7 . 8/28/2009 That was grea! Cant wait for more! |
| Bahumat knight chapter 7 . 8/28/2009 another awesome chapter, loved it, really looking forward to reading more! |
| umbra proeliator chapter 7 . 8/28/2009 please continue the story |
| Rakkety Tom chapter 7 . 8/28/2009 A great and unique story Keep it up - X3K |
| youngdosha31 chapter 5 . 7/17/2009 I honestly thought that you were gonna have naruto marry the female toad. Well this chapter was kool. I love the red headed harem too. Gotta love Tayuya. Ill be looking forward to the next chapter. |
| SeikoRin chapter 5 . 7/8/2009 surprisingly nice and hilariously funny, just keep on track |
| chm01 chapter 5 . 7/8/2009 interesting |
| Heroes-of-Love chapter 5 . 6/25/2009 Not bad with the way the story goes day-by-day. Also I agree with the pairing but am a little mad that Hinata's hopes were destroyed |
