Reviews for Beg For Forgiveness
mxmsupporter chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
... Did Mello finally say these words, I wonder..?
I want to write something but my mind is empty. This was so tragic, I feel like a wave has washed me from the shore. Such a shame Mello was too slow. Such a shame that Matsuda had to give him that damn bag. I think this is a first time somebody made me dislike Matsu. Beautiful, heartbreaking ending. A sad story of an overdose. Thanks for writing that.
Cathy Jeevas chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I wanted to say thank you, I was reading this story as the clock struck midnight which marks my birthday, today is my birthday, and I cried when i read this. It was really sad and beautiful story.

This is probably the best birthday gift I'll receive this year, thank you so much for kaking my birthday special for me, I hope you continue to write, you have a amazing talent

From,

Cathy Jeevas
Atreyl chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
My god, Mello, why didn't you just tell him you loved him? And you promised, too...

Great story. Favoriting.
InnerShadow chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Wow, that was super depressing! I think it was the end that really got me, the part when Mello says he won't ever say I love you because Matt wasn't going to die on him...I teared up. :) Great story!
shadow-of-a-demon chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
O:

I read one of your stories. XD You've improved so much compared to the last one Iread of yours. Twas beautifully written, lots of big words. O_O XD Flowed perfectly and all that stuff. I liked it, lots.

Peace out!

(I hope can still leave those)
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
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Awesomely angsty...

I love that song by t.A.T.u.~

x3

Also... Gomenasai... and another one... I forgot...

xDD
dobby'socks7 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
OMFG THIS STORY MADE ME FREAKING CRY! so sad and beautiful great job so sad!
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
Oh. My. God. *tearscryingsobs* :[ Poor Matty! Poor Mells! POOR WORLD! *cries* That's depressing and sad and... well, brilliant. ' And also quite a bit longer than the other oneshots you wrote.

And why the many promises! Matty... *looks despairingly at screen* you... you... *whispers* idiot... *shouts* ANGEL!

I'm sorry, the Matt fangirl in me couldn't treat the puppy badly... ' Even though he should be punished, she won't let me... I leave the job to another. All the flashback stuff was really nice. I enjoyed it. Despite all the crying and sobbing going on throughout. Seriously, Matt, no WONDER you were third at Wammy's! Can't stay away from things that dangerous? :[ You sadden your fans... (not disappoint, my fangirl-inner-self won't let me say that to him ')

Christie is one of those OCs that I don't particularly mind being around. The type who's THERE, but doesn't influence the couple too much. Y'know, that kind. The kind that isn't like CxOC PAIRING because I hate those things with a PASSION. I mean seriously, some STUPID PEOPLE seem to like SEPARATING the GREATEST COUPLES EVER so that their own imaginary person can TAKE THE GUYS AWAY!

I don't read it either, obviously. ' Now, I'm not saying it's not okay to have OCs in a fic, or even as a partner for one of the guys in the couple, but it shouldn't be like "this person is this guy's love intrest" or " this person greatly impacts both of their lives just by being there." I mean, serious BULLS-. ' *ahem*

I mean, what? *blinks innocently* :D I gave you another long review! (Seems to happen consistently, eh?)
Azurela chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Aww, so sad :

Good job, hun. I hope you write again soon!
Her Sweetness chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Yo, girlie. :3 Sorry I've been so busy lately. And my hand is cramping right now...

Anyway, good job on the story and yes, I do think Christi was a better placement than Maggie. XD; Maggie's a hooker and she's mostly uneducated - so putting her there wouldn't have made much sense. I like what you were doing, you worked two angles with Mello and Christi and made Mello's connection with Matthew stronger.

Oh, and...

"Hey, Christi-baby, don't bother coming home. I love ya and all, but, you won't love me. I did a little more then smoke in your apartment today."

I really liked the meaning of this statement. It's so Matthew~

Lol at Matsuda being a drug dealer.

Goodbye and goodluck!
Riku-Aura777 chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
This was so depressing! I haven't found any good Mello/Matt stories in awhile, so this was a nice find. And I did like your OC, which was rare, since I'm not the biggest fan of them. I never really pictured Matsuda as a druggie, but then again, I can't really picture anyone else being one either, so I can understand why you'd pick him.

I had a feeling when I was reading this that it wasn't going to have a happy ending, but I kept hoping I would be wrong. Even though it ended sadly, it was still wonderful. Good job.
Sexykill69 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
I gave her chance...Ehh I didn't really like it. It sounded whiny at times. But besides that is was good. I guess it was hott enough for me, y'know? no 'extreme' anything. But good luck on your hiatus Buttons. Honestly I've been on one for months now. I can't find my damn-dable Travel drive! *rips out hair* I can't get anything uploaded with out my parents knowing! *growls and dunks face in bucket of ice water*
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
-sobs-
ForeverMATT chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
THIS WAS AMAZING!

I didn't mind your OC either! Yay!

Poor Matt died, and Mello was left alone.

So, was it implied that MelloxChristi were gonna get together, or were they just going to comfort one another?