I have tears on my face. This is beautiful.

I swear I read this chapter before. But I don't remember reading the other chapters in this story. Love the story by the way.

Beautiful. I loved it.

I know you're not writing on this site anymore, and honestly, I haven't been on it in years, myself- but every once in a while I come back, just to read a few of my old favorites. Not the least of which are some of your own stories.
I cry. Every. Single. Time. (Under a Swift Sunrise gets me the worst, though. I blubber like a baby the entire time.)
I sincerely hope that you've continued to grow as an author, and have not given up on writing original works. Your fics have touched me, and I just wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed them over the years.
Thank you, and God bless.

Too sweet! For some reason, I couldn't stop giggling over Edmund's name for his little stuffed bear... XD

Excellent chapter. I love your symbolism for blue and how it came about for Edmund.

Absolutely ADORABLE! Oh my I have tears in my eyes- so well done!

Awww, oh my gosh! This is so cute! I just thought it was so adorable that Edmund wanted his favor color to be blue because Peter's favorite color was blue, too! How adorable!

Keep up the amazing work! I enjoyed it from start to finish!

This was absolutely tragic but I love it.

It's so sad.

I love how that was Edmund's last word to Susan before the accident.

This was is perfect I love that you started with old Susan and ended with them as little kids!

I just read this story today and I just have to say that this is truly a work of art. Its extremely well written, very well thought out, and creative. I love the way the story progresses backward, each time finding out a little more information on the subject. I love how touching this story truly is, I teared up when reading the last few paragraphs. The way you relayed the message behind the color blue, is just beautiful. Digging a little deeper picking up things here and there until the reveal.
I love this story, truly one of my favorites every written.
And that goes for all short stories, not just fanfiction on this site.

I love it. I don't why but by the fourth last paragraph of this chapter, when Mrs. Pevensie explained why Edmund's favorite color is blue, was I just tearing up. I guess it just comes from reading so many of your tear-jerking, heartstring tugging Edmund&Peter brotherfic today.

I really really loved it :)
I really enjoyed the reading, it was so pure and cute
Edmund giving Susan the Bible :)
Edmund and the idea of the fell creatures.. i liked it very much

Im sad because it was really short, but i truly truly enjoyed :)
Nice to reading you,
Bye

Hello!

(First, I'm sorry for my awful english.) I let you a review for to say how I like your fanfiction. I read the translation of "Blue Heart" (in French), and…I discovered a story who very touch me.

Edmund is my special character in the Chronicles of Narnia. You describe Edmund as a right person, who love his family and who have honest feelings. I liked this description of him and I very affected by this.

Moreover, my favourite color is blue. And I must to say that: BlueEdmund is a very compatible addition, for me.

And today, when I read back your fanfiction, it not annoy me. So, thank you for have righted this story.

Bye.

Neat story, I liked the way it was told backwards, with each chapter bringing you closer to the reasons. Loved the chapter of Susan's redemption. Very inspiring story.